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In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne

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Comment from Wendy G
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Nolan will love this beautiful poem, and it celebrates the beauty and richness of their love, and acknowledges his present pain, while offering hope for and assurance of their being together throughout eternity.
Wendy

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    His own poem is precious... I'm praying for him!

    Thanks,

    Karenina
Comment from Douglas Goff
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I feel so bad for Nomi. He always has nothing but kind words for me..

You, my dear friend, have an incredible knack for kindness and heartfelt warm words.

I hope all of these poems are a comfort to his aching soul.
Douglas

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    What a nice collection of poems for such a kind man!

    Thanks,

    Karenina
Comment from nancyjam
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This is a lovely poem for Nomi, in honor of his wife. I had just read his poem about her passing. It is heartbreaking and I'm sure he will be comforted by your poem.
Nancy

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Wasn't his poem a loving tribute? I'm glad he has Debi's book to comfort him as time goes by!

    Thanks,

    Karenina
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Karenina,
This is a good ode to Nomi's/Nolan's wife. Sorry to hear that he lost his wife. At least she died without pain. And we all know that he will see her again.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Our faith in meeting again carries us forward! His own poem about her is so poignant!

    Thanks,

    Kareninsu
reply by dragonpoet on 11-Sep-2024
    I will read his poem.
    You're welcome, Karenina.
    Joan
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Your poem is so sweet, so touching, my friend. It seems to have captured the essence of this tragedy. I will say I've been with family members, including my mother, who suffered before they passed. To go without pain and beside her beloved, what better way. It's small consolation for his own suffering, but it's something.

Your poem was so tender and so very well written, it made me cry!!

Love and hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Oh, no! I had tissues nearby as well. Such a difficult loss, but I, too, am thankful she passed beside her sweet husband, in her sleep...

    Thanks!

    Karenina
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this poem for Nomi with us. I know it will help comfort him. I also know many FanStorians are praying him and his family as I am. God will keep His promise and Nomi will be reunited with his wife.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    He is surrounded in prayer!

    His own poem shows he is being warmly supported by family.

    Thank you,

    Karenina
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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This is a beautiful poem. Losing someone is so hard, especially after all those years. Your poem was heartfelt and well written. The poem was also descriptive.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Fifty One years married! How amazing is that? His faith will carry him through his grief.

    Thanks!

    Karenina
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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great poem about the lost of a wife. I have been married 42 years and don't know what I would do without her by my side. She is my best friend, lover and guardian angel.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    May God bless you both with many more years!

    Thanks,

    Karenina
Comment from nomi338
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This is awesomely beautiful. Not only am I overwhelmingly overcome by your generous expression of compassion at my loss. I am also totally impressed by your awesome skill as a gifted writer. I too have compose a poem that may sound similar to yours. I did not copy from you but our thoughts appear to be quite similar. Thank you so much for your beautiful expression.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Oh, dear Nomi! You could not have blessed me more than to say our poems are similar...

    It is because I sensed your love for her!

    Than you so much!

    Karenina
Comment from estory
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This was another great sympathy piece for Nomi and his loss. I thought there was peace in it, capturing that moment of a peaceful passing, and Hope in the world and life to come. estory

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    She had a peaceful passing, beside her husband of fifty one years...

    That has to be of comfort to a grieving Nomi.

    Thanks,

    Karenina