Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

It appears that the goldfinch got the last word without uttering a note. Your humor was subtle but great! Even our beautiful little birds can want for more when they are already blessed with song.
smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

Thank you so much, Carol for a delightful response.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

I gave you a five only because I like you and know you are a good writer. You have to do this one over. The box showed only one word: "Jealousy". I know the judges won't allow this.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024

Thanks Jim, I was just checking to see if I had entered that poem. I had. I'll work on another entry!

reply by jim vecchio on 10-Sep-2024

I'll look forward to it!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Average

I'm not sure what happened here. If you edit your poem please let me know and I will update my review. Right now there is just one word....

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024

I was just checking to see if I had entered that poem already. I had! I'll work on another.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I do not understand this at all. It says it's supposed to be a rhyming poem and all I see is the word jealousy. What am I missing. God bless you. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024

Sorry, I was just checking to see if I had entered that poem before. I had! I'll work on another.