Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written and was a real pleasure to read I wish you the very best and may you have a wonderful week and may God bless you. Have a good dayPatricia

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

Thanks Pat, for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for this beautiful poem for Nomi! You capture the grief but also remind us for the eternal joy and love that we look forward to in Heaven!

Did you mean:
were once my love you slept. (where)

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

Thanks Helen, for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Your opening verse in this one is particularly poignant, Roy, the empty space beside him, his tears on her pillow.
edit - were (where) once my love you slept -
another lovely poem for nomi
cheers,
valda



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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

Thanks Valda for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy