Spirited Justice
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, some of your action descriptions in this chapter are your best yet, and they are always great. I almost waited to review this one so I could give it the extra star it deserves. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Wow, some of your action descriptions in this chapter are your best yet, and they are always great. I almost waited to review this one so I could give it the extra star it deserves. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I appreciate you as always and the fact that you enjoyed the story is all that counts with me. At least it gives me something to smile about instead of getting grumpy because I join all these blind contests and nobody reads what I write at all. I've got to stop! Thanks as always!!!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Oh, you! I am disproportionately relieved that Alejandro will not pay with his life.
But you had my pulse racing right up to the end!
Canada IS nice this time of year!
Bless you for saving him!
Karenina
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Oh, you! I am disproportionately relieved that Alejandro will not pay with his life.
But you had my pulse racing right up to the end!
Canada IS nice this time of year!
Bless you for saving him!
Karenina
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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i couldn't kill him off just because he foolishly worshipped his childhood buddy...There had to be another answer. thanks so much and I hope he likes Canada.
Smiles, Carol
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I recommend Prince Edward Island...
He can take the car ferry and it's heavenly there!
:)
Comment from LJbutterfly
I just don't know how you think this stuff up, but I'm enjoying the heck out of it. I was terrified for Alejandro as he ran down the street, only to be captured by two goons and forced into an SUV. I love the way you build suspense without revealing outcomes until you are good and ready. Yaay! You found a way for Alejandro to get away without being killed. This was an exciting chapter. I can't begin to guess what you have in store next.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I just don't know how you think this stuff up, but I'm enjoying the heck out of it. I was terrified for Alejandro as he ran down the street, only to be captured by two goons and forced into an SUV. I love the way you build suspense without revealing outcomes until you are good and ready. Yaay! You found a way for Alejandro to get away without being killed. This was an exciting chapter. I can't begin to guess what you have in store next.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Another explosion is about to happen... Thanks so much for your awesome thoughts. I couldn't let silly Alejandro get murdered just because he was so foolish to do what ever Jose wanted him to do. So he's probably off to Candad...at least if he's smart. I was about to end my night and I am so happy that I can do it with a great big smile on my face. You ar so awesome.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
I guess Alejandro has learned not to trust his friend Angelo, but I'm glad Angelo stopped those men from killing Alejandro. Will Carlos keep his word to Angelo, or will Angelo regret being involved? One small fix: (Let's just) say they will be preoccupied.... Good chapter with lots of tension. Blessings. Carol
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I guess Alejandro has learned not to trust his friend Angelo, but I'm glad Angelo stopped those men from killing Alejandro. Will Carlos keep his word to Angelo, or will Angelo regret being involved? One small fix: (Let's just) say they will be preoccupied.... Good chapter with lots of tension. Blessings. Carol
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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there's Eagle Eye on the job again! Thanks so much for catching that for me. It's fixed and I thank you. Appreciate the review and your thoughts as always.
Smiles, Carol
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I don't know why my brain sees those, but I guess I've trained it that way after all those years of grading papers and tests.