Sally's Accident
Playing football in the house ~ JK26 total reviews
Comment from Harry Craft
Lol! What a great piece Debi. Great rhyming scheme, great way to tell a story about someone too. I really enjoyed reading this one. I know it's not funny, but the way you tell it makes it so. Keep up the great work!
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Lol! What a great piece Debi. Great rhyming scheme, great way to tell a story about someone too. I really enjoyed reading this one. I know it's not funny, but the way you tell it makes it so. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from Sallyo
Ouch! Any damage to feet or hands can be a literal pain and you tell the story with immediacy and humour. I hope Sally, whoever she is, feels better soon... (It sounds to be a true story). Love the last lines.
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Ouch! Any damage to feet or hands can be a literal pain and you tell the story with immediacy and humour. I hope Sally, whoever she is, feels better soon... (It sounds to be a true story). Love the last lines.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Debi,
Poor Sally. I wonder how her foot is doing now... do you know? She's still writing, though. She just finished another chapter in her "end times" series. She has a wonderful hubby, though. Jack will take good care of her. He'll play "footsie" with her good foot!
My favorite lines,
"She'll have to settle for the spa
'Cause there will be no cha-cha-cha"
and,
"Don't give your foot another whack
You'll lose more footsie time with Jack"
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
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Hi Debi,
Poor Sally. I wonder how her foot is doing now... do you know? She's still writing, though. She just finished another chapter in her "end times" series. She has a wonderful hubby, though. Jack will take good care of her. He'll play "footsie" with her good foot!
My favorite lines,
"She'll have to settle for the spa
'Cause there will be no cha-cha-cha"
and,
"Don't give your foot another whack
You'll lose more footsie time with Jack"
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from patcelaw
I am so sorry to hear if Sally's accident with the chair. Being almost blind myself, I can understand totally how she could've hit a chair that she didn't realize was there. I walk with a walker and the other day I had a chair that I didn't know was there, but fortunately my walker kept me from doing any damage to myself. Dear Sally, we love you and are so sorry for your accident, but we also know that you are a real trooper and you have a good sense of humor thank you so much for loving us and for giving us your beautiful work Patricia.
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I am so sorry to hear if Sally's accident with the chair. Being almost blind myself, I can understand totally how she could've hit a chair that she didn't realize was there. I walk with a walker and the other day I had a chair that I didn't know was there, but fortunately my walker kept me from doing any damage to myself. Dear Sally, we love you and are so sorry for your accident, but we also know that you are a real trooper and you have a good sense of humor thank you so much for loving us and for giving us your beautiful work Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm sorry to hear about Sally's accident. She remains on my permeant prayer list, as you do. I will surely add this special prayer. Oh my, as we age things happens and she's at a disadvantage having a sight problem. Thank you again, our special angel.
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I'm sorry to hear about Sally's accident. She remains on my permeant prayer list, as you do. I will surely add this special prayer. Oh my, as we age things happens and she's at a disadvantage having a sight problem. Thank you again, our special angel.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from nomi338
One of the worst things about accidents is that they never take place on purpose and are almost always embarrassing. It is virtually impossible to look god during an accident, and many times there is some sort of injury to accompany it. So, there is also the element of pain. I do hope that Sally will recover fully from her unfortunate encounter.
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One of the worst things about accidents is that they never take place on purpose and are almost always embarrassing. It is virtually impossible to look god during an accident, and many times there is some sort of injury to accompany it. So, there is also the element of pain. I do hope that Sally will recover fully from her unfortunate encounter.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Well, I just loved your last stanza, Debi - made me smile:-)
Sal, no football in the house! Didn't you tell your kids that?
Seriously, get well soon - having a boot is damn inconvenient and really cramps one's style. No cha-cha-cha for you, girl!
Thanks for letting us know, Deb.
xo
Pam
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Well, I just loved your last stanza, Debi - made me smile:-)
Sal, no football in the house! Didn't you tell your kids that?
Seriously, get well soon - having a boot is damn inconvenient and really cramps one's style. No cha-cha-cha for you, girl!
Thanks for letting us know, Deb.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from Teri7
Thank you for writing and letting us know about Sal's accident. You used great descriptive words and very nice pic of Sal and Jack. Thank you for sharing my friend. I pray her body mends and heals soon. love and blessings, Teri
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Thank you for writing and letting us know about Sal's accident. You used great descriptive words and very nice pic of Sal and Jack. Thank you for sharing my friend. I pray her body mends and heals soon. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Debi,
Nice poem about Sally.Im glad she's alright, and back to writing again.
Nice rhyme and sentiment. Great photo of a happy couple.
I love the ending.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Debi,
Nice poem about Sally.Im glad she's alright, and back to writing again.
Nice rhyme and sentiment. Great photo of a happy couple.
I love the ending.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Absolutely adorable healing sauve for Sally.... Thank you for sharing this story about Sally and I hope she recovers fast...but I know her humor will help her get through this. the best to both of you....
Smiles, Carol
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Absolutely adorable healing sauve for Sally.... Thank you for sharing this story about Sally and I hope she recovers fast...but I know her humor will help her get through this. the best to both of you....
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024