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Show off Witch

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Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, that is so, but tit's still a fun limerick and the image adds to the humour. Well written. Best wishes for the contest.

Wendy

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Wendy, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from Colorado Owl
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This is delightful! I'm a sucker for limericks, and yours did not disappoint. The image you chose is hilarious and suits your words well. Thank you.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Hi CO, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
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Hello!

Just checking in on the limericks! I do get a little stuck reviewing short poetry. I'm not exactly sure what to say about them other than they are good or something is wrong. I will say that I have never read or heard about a witch named "Mick." Whenever I think of that name, I think of Rocky Balboa's trainer or Crocodile Dundee! *laughs*

Anyway, good luck in the contest!

Patrick

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Hey Patrick, you say you never heard of a witch named Mick? Then you never met my mother in-law. LOL.. Seriously! I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from jmdg1954
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Hey, who doesn't enjoy a good limerick? Well this was a good one.

The hag knocked her off her broom-stick! Good von living line.

Best of luck in the contest,

Cheery-o...
John

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    And a cheery-o to you, my fine Chef Pierre, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This limerick, Showoff Witch, has the proper formatting and shows the readers that trying to strut your stuff too much can lead to a witching hour brought by some witches.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Hey Bill, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from jessizero
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This limerick made me smile. You got the suggested syllable counts right, and the poem itself was fun. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Hi Jessi, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this Limerick writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading. This entry was fun to read. I smiled as I did. This is a cute write.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Hi Barb, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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nice entry for the contest. Loved it

here's mine I will post shortly

Trumpian Limerick Fan Story

there once was madman named Trump
Trump loved to sit on his fat rump
He was a wild man
felt he was a he-man
in the end toxic waste dump

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Hi Jake, I am not into Trump bashing.
    Thanks for the kind comments for my limerick.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Just in time for Halloween, you've written the perfect limerick. The pace, flow, and rhythm add to the enjoyment of the story, un-effected by the stress syllable of the last line. This is humorous and well done. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Hi Lorraine, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.
Comment from Shanbreen
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To me, it doesn't matter if the stressed syllable is in the wrong place. It flows smoothly off the tongue as poems are supposed to do. Young witches and old hags--how can you go wrong with that when Halloween is around the corner?=_

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Hi Shanbreen, I thank you for your fun review and comments for my silly Halloween limerick. You are very kind.