Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Pumpkin 5-7-5 writing prompt. Misshapen pumpkins often help make the most inventive jack o'lanterns, I noticed one typo but wasn't sure if you did it on purpose. Pumpkins is misspelled.
Thanks for sharing. Good luck

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024

Thanks so very much for your review and good luck wishes!

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Great advice, fun haiku, and absolutely fabulous picture that proves you don't merely talk the talk, you also big-time walk the walk! I will be heeding this suggestion this year when choosing and carving the pumpkins for our front porch. You have done a wonderful service today. xoxo

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024

Thanks so very much Rachelle and I'm glad it inspired you

reply by Rachelle Allen on 27-Sep-2024

It honestly did!!!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A fun post for the contest... although, I do believe that you have misspelled 'misshapen' here... Thanx for sharing and bet of luck in the contest! ;)

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024

Thanks so very much for reviewing Y.M. Roger and Thanks for the good luck wishes too!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written pumpkin haiku for the contest that I wish you the very best with the contest. May you have a wonderful evening and may your weekend be blessed. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024

Thanks so very much Patricia!
Enjoy you weekend!