Ocean motion
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Comment from lyenochka
Not only did you create a lovely poem with a perfect rhyme scheme! I loved "Where dreams fold time and softly bend" and "Carve me a devotion, let it grow. To believe again, with a whispered plea,"
Hope this does well in the contest!!
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Not only did you create a lovely poem with a perfect rhyme scheme! I loved "Where dreams fold time and softly bend" and "Carve me a devotion, let it grow. To believe again, with a whispered plea,"
Hope this does well in the contest!!
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Hi Helen thank you for reading and commenting. Are you okay? I hope the hurricane stayed away from you and your family.
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We're on the other side of the country. Are you okay?
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No ocean on my end just a plain space:)