Human beings
A poem15 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
He gave so much for us and suffered the agony of the cross, yet we still find ourselves slipping and not being the perfect child. But be assured his love will never fail us.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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He gave so much for us and suffered the agony of the cross, yet we still find ourselves slipping and not being the perfect child. But be assured his love will never fail us.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks Carol for your generous comments and very kind review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
Praise the Lord for winning for us "Heaven's ground" and in Him we are found and blessed with His joy and His immeasurable love. We'll never fully comprehend it all.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Praise the Lord for winning for us "Heaven's ground" and in Him we are found and blessed with His joy and His immeasurable love. We'll never fully comprehend it all.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks Helen, for your Terrific comments and lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, thankfully He still loves us enough to redeem us, though we did not deserve this. He suffered anguished pain on our behalf, while we were still sinners. Lovely poem.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Yes, thankfully He still loves us enough to redeem us, though we did not deserve this. He suffered anguished pain on our behalf, while we were still sinners. Lovely poem.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks Wendy, for your generous comments and very kind review, blessings Roy
Comment from DonandVicki
I enjoyed reading this poem as I do all of your work, Roy. The line that spoke to me is: "The Lord still thinks we have great worth while we still cloud His days." There are days that I do not feel worthy, most days.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed reading this poem as I do all of your work, Roy. The line that spoke to me is: "The Lord still thinks we have great worth while we still cloud His days." There are days that I do not feel worthy, most days.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
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Thanks D&V for your generous comments and very kind review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carol Clark2
Our pastor mentioned the first Adam and second Adam in his sermon today from 1 Corinthians 15. Interesting that I'm hearing it from you also!
Good rhymes throughout. I like that you changed the rhyme scheme and line length for the final stanza. Blessings. Carol
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Our pastor mentioned the first Adam and second Adam in his sermon today from 1 Corinthians 15. Interesting that I'm hearing it from you also!
Good rhymes throughout. I like that you changed the rhyme scheme and line length for the final stanza. Blessings. Carol
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much Carol, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome. Blessings. Carol
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Thank you Carol.