Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

I like how you compared the low point in one's life to a fen, wet and hard to trudge through. Then God touched you and brought you to a higher place.

A beautiful sunrise picture.

Well done, Roy.

Have a good week:-)

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thanks Pam, for your generous comments and very kind review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

Thanks again for sharing your personal testimony of how God saved you from addiction and "stirred salvation's dawn" in your heart and soul. Well done in your iambic heptameter sonnet.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thanks Helen for your generous comments and very kind review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Another fine poem to celebrate and honour Jesus for what He has done for you, moving you from the kingdom of darkness into His kingom of light. Well done
Wendy

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thanks Wendy, for your terrific comments and lovely review, blessings Roy

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

You're not alone in those 'wasteful ways' from which God has redeemed you. You're right that God is never late to save. It is our response which is often delayed. Thankfully, He continues to pursue us. Good faith statement. Blessings. Carol

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 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thanks Carol for your generous comments and very kind review, blessings Roy

reply by Carol Clark2 on 14-Oct-2024

You're welcome. God is good all the time!

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thank you

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

but there are many stumbling stops, addiction was my god,
till one fine day when I wore chains I faced death's miry sod

If these words are not fiction, you are truly blessed. I have lost several loved ones to addiction and they wore their chains straight into death. They had no second chance. Beautiful words of thankfulness. thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

I stopped drinking, smoking and gambling when He told me to, 40 years ago, my family were glad Marilyn, so am I, thanks for the brilliant review, blessings Roy