Wretched tree
A poem12 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
A wonderful and powerful poem. It seems as though you are totally inspired at the moment. A great way to be. Keep going and I am hoping to feed of your inspiration and get back to some poetry. Take care.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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A wonderful and powerful poem. It seems as though you are totally inspired at the moment. A great way to be. Keep going and I am hoping to feed of your inspiration and get back to some poetry. Take care.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thanks Barry, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very well written, Roy. I like how biblical your poetry is. Absolutely fantastic!
This line was captivating:
The serpent's head my Child will crush,
His heel will bruise...
Douglas
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Very well written, Roy. I like how biblical your poetry is. Absolutely fantastic!
This line was captivating:
The serpent's head my Child will crush,
His heel will bruise...
Douglas
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thanks Douglas for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy