A Park Bench on Sunday
A promise without bounds...13 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a lovely ghost romance story! I can't imagine how I'd react if it happened to me. You told the tale well...I felt cold reading it. Haha!
Well done and best of luck with the contest!
Julie
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This is a lovely ghost romance story! I can't imagine how I'd react if it happened to me. You told the tale well...I felt cold reading it. Haha!
Well done and best of luck with the contest!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This was a great story. Reading through the poem I would never had believed Henty was dead. It all makes sense that henry isn't freezing to death. I enjoyed this story. Keep them coming.
Cccilia
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This was a great story. Reading through the poem I would never had believed Henty was dead. It all makes sense that henry isn't freezing to death. I enjoyed this story. Keep them coming.
Cccilia
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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your welcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a heartwarming story! . I love the way you introduce Henry and his charming personality--it's easy to feel drawn into his world and the love he shares with Delores. The twist at the end is both surprising and touching. The dialogue flows so naturally, and I found myself smiling at Delores's laughter and her determination to keep that promise. Keep up the fantastic work; your storytelling is delightful!
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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What a heartwarming story! . I love the way you introduce Henry and his charming personality--it's easy to feel drawn into his world and the love he shares with Delores. The twist at the end is both surprising and touching. The dialogue flows so naturally, and I found myself smiling at Delores's laughter and her determination to keep that promise. Keep up the fantastic work; your storytelling is delightful!
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!