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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Pam's Version"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from patcelaw
Your version of the condition was very entertaining to listen to and I enjoyed all of the different people that were mentioned. I know many of them and have read much of their works. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you with good things for the weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Your version of the condition was very entertaining to listen to and I enjoyed all of the different people that were mentioned. I know many of them and have read much of their works. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you with good things for the weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the review, Patricia. I appreciate your comments about my version being entertaining and enjoying all the people mentioned. I'm glad you knew many of them and their works, as well. Have a good evening and rest of your week.
Comment from Wendy G
Another super post! Thank you Pam for this piece of fun writing, making it a little different by linking it with Halloween - It was good that costumes and outfits were supplied rather than leave everyone in towels! Lol. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Another super post! Thank you Pam for this piece of fun writing, making it a little different by linking it with Halloween - It was good that costumes and outfits were supplied rather than leave everyone in towels! Lol. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks for the review, Wendy. I appreciate your comments a bout this post being fun and linking it with Halloween. I agree about the costumes!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That was a fun read! I like the 60s outfit and the description is that everything else in their outfit?Very complimentary, too!
You have a fun way of turning phrase which I enjoy very much. They're very good creating the visuals!
It was a great read by a true wordsmith. Thank you for this and I'd like to read some more!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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That was a fun read! I like the 60s outfit and the description is that everything else in their outfit?Very complimentary, too!
You have a fun way of turning phrase which I enjoy very much. They're very good creating the visuals!
It was a great read by a true wordsmith. Thank you for this and I'd like to read some more!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks for the review, Lea. I appreciate all of your comments and am glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for commenting on the phrasing, and wanting to see more. Your compliment is also appreciated. I think I surprised myself by doing this.
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I enjoyed it! Great job!
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Comment from judiverse
And I didn't even get a honorable mention! It would be great to have an event like this happened more often. I haven't seen anything that's engaged so many FS members as this has. Having Hugh Jackman there would definitely be a plus. I'm glad you mentioned Tom. Rachelle went to a lot of work in describing what the different characters wore. judi
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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And I didn't even get a honorable mention! It would be great to have an event like this happened more often. I haven't seen anything that's engaged so many FS members as this has. Having Hugh Jackman there would definitely be a plus. I'm glad you mentioned Tom. Rachelle went to a lot of work in describing what the different characters wore. judi
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thanks for the review, judi. I appreciate your comments about having an event like this. It has struck a chord and is very creative. I totally agree about Hugh Jackman. I'm glad you liked the inclusion of Tom and descriptions of costumes.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh wow!! A FS Halloween party. I have to be honest; I was so hoping there would be nothing else for Lee to wear except the pink number. Oh well.
This was chock full of imagination and excitement and fun, Pam! You did a fantastic job. Thank you for bringing your talent on board and contributing this delightful chapter!! xoxox
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Oh wow!! A FS Halloween party. I have to be honest; I was so hoping there would be nothing else for Lee to wear except the pink number. Oh well.
This was chock full of imagination and excitement and fun, Pam! You did a fantastic job. Thank you for bringing your talent on board and contributing this delightful chapter!! xoxox
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the review, Rachelle. I am glad you liked the story, imagination and excitement. I appreciated you offering the challenge. It is a good way to challenge yourself, and have fun, too.
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Exactly! AND be part of a history-making group endeavor! xo
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Exactly!
Comment from lyenochka
Of course, you would know what hotel to pick for the picture. I have no idea about your part of the country. Seems like you had fun dressing up our favorite Fanstorians! What a great group!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Of course, you would know what hotel to pick for the picture. I have no idea about your part of the country. Seems like you had fun dressing up our favorite Fanstorians! What a great group!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the review, Helen. I don't know any specifics about the hotels, but I think most of them are over the top. It was fun to write and a good challenge. I am glad you liked the group.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wow, sorry to be so vain, but could I possibly keep my outfit? It sounded fab and took me back to the 70s and that festival on the Isle of Wight:)) This is great fun, Pam. I loved the descriptions of everyone. We girls always want those details. And I laughed at Humpwhistle's and Ric Mywor(l)d's protestations. Your story must have preceded the food fight because there wasn't much left of this rabble after that!! Thank you so much, Pam, for sharing your colourful and entertaining take on this event. All very enjoyable. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Wow, sorry to be so vain, but could I possibly keep my outfit? It sounded fab and took me back to the 70s and that festival on the Isle of Wight:)) This is great fun, Pam. I loved the descriptions of everyone. We girls always want those details. And I laughed at Humpwhistle's and Ric Mywor(l)d's protestations. Your story must have preceded the food fight because there wasn't much left of this rabble after that!! Thank you so much, Pam, for sharing your colourful and entertaining take on this event. All very enjoyable. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the review, Debbie. I appreciate your comments and yes you can keep the outfit. I will send you the picture I based it on in your e-mail. I am glad you liked the descriptions. I had to go with what worked for me. I've never been a rabble rouser, although I enjoy having fun. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
I did get to say grace and then when all the ruckus was going on, I left my evil twins there to carry on while I retired in contemplation to my presidential suite in roof of my hotel. Thanks for writing this Pam, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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I did get to say grace and then when all the ruckus was going on, I left my evil twins there to carry on while I retired in contemplation to my presidential suite in roof of my hotel. Thanks for writing this Pam, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the review, Roy. You were given a special honor. I guess you did leave the evil twins behind, though. A presidential suite isn't too shabby! I am glad you enjoyed it.
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I can dream heh hey
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This is true😊
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Pam!
Such a fun version to share with readers!
Love your take on what actually happened.
The Halloween costumes and the three witches were a sublime touch!
And Hugh Jackman was a most delightful touch as well ! :)
Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Hello, Pam!
Such a fun version to share with readers!
Love your take on what actually happened.
The Halloween costumes and the three witches were a sublime touch!
And Hugh Jackman was a most delightful touch as well ! :)
Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the review, diane. I appreciate your comments about this version and the fun at Halloween. I am glad you liked the costumes and the witches. I couldn't leave them out. Hugh Jackman was one of my very favorite actors!!! I have been so busy with this; I will get to your version, as well.
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo! And yes, the white hair was perfect! I'm honored to be included in your story and to resemble the lovable Eleanor. I'm even happier to have the opportunity to meet you, Sandra, and Ulla face to face...what an honor. This has been so much fun, and of course, I had to write The Morning After today as well. I couldn't let all our friends drift away to their own writing again. So I got a twofer out of fit. Thanks for sharing your exciting night.....
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Bravo! And yes, the white hair was perfect! I'm honored to be included in your story and to resemble the lovable Eleanor. I'm even happier to have the opportunity to meet you, Sandra, and Ulla face to face...what an honor. This has been so much fun, and of course, I had to write The Morning After today as well. I couldn't let all our friends drift away to their own writing again. So I got a twofer out of fit. Thanks for sharing your exciting night.....
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the review, Carol. I am honored to have you in the story. It is wonderful to meet each other. It has been a lot of fun. I am glad you got a "twofer." I will check out your "Morning After." This has also been a good exercise in finding ideas that fit in with what someone else wrote.
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Smiles and hugs!
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😊😊😊 and hugs back to you!!