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Our Rhonda Rose of Texas

For Davisr Rhonda ~ a two rhymed modified Quatern

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Comment from DonandVicki
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Another lovely Birthday tribute to a friend and poet. Rhonda has had a rough road lately and I hope this birthday poem warms her heart. A lovely poem as usual.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Don and Vicki, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    Thanks for the very kind comments, my dear friends. Love, Debi
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is an interesting poem you have created for Rhonda. I hope her husband is getting better quickly now so her birthday this year is very special as he can rejoin her.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Yes, you are right, Carol, very interesting. LOL.. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.
    Thanks for your kind comments, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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A very Happy Birthday wish to Rhonda. Keeping you and Wayne in my prayers and do hope he is improving daily. Thanks to Debi for writing your special poem and doing such an amazing job as always. Fun watching all the videos added.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Marilyn, are you back from your vacation? I have never been so busy with a new poem every day and today I had another one so I think I am caught up.
    But, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    Thanks again, Sweetie. Love, Debi. *maybe I can get your way tonight.
reply by Marilyn Hamilton on 04-Nov-2024
    I noticed! Loved the videos and the poem. I also noticed how busy you've been while I was away. I am happy to finally be back and have my computer again lol
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Well if I had to be busy, that was a good time so I didn't miss you so much.
Comment from royowen
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Here you are again being a good friend, and a mighty purveyor of good wishes and Christ like love for a fellow fanstoryan, this is a most thoughtful work, and a super considerate work to cheer her up on her birthday, beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Roy, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    I have been on overload for poems lately. This is the strangest one I think I ever have done, but she needed silly today. Haha.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for all your kind comments. Love, Debi
reply by royowen on 04-Nov-2024
    You're a wonderful saint Debi
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Roy, you are so sweet. Thank you.
reply by royowen on 04-Nov-2024
    Bless you
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing Rhonda's special day with us. I know I'm praying for her, Wayne and their family during this time. I will surely take time to wish her a special happy birthday. Again, our special angel, thank you.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Barb, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    I have been on overload for poems lately. This is the strangest one I think I ever have done, but she needed silly today. Haha.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for all your kind comments. Love, Debi
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Well, well, first your notes -- you bet I want another birthday poem from you! But it's still a ways off, so I will write to you as February approaches.

As for this birthday card/poem (because that's what this should be -- it would make a beautiful card) Rhonda will love it!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Dawn, I will write that you want one but it doesn't hurt to remind me.
    And you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    I have been on overload for poems lately. This is the strangest one I think I ever have done, but she needed silly today. Haha.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for all your kind comments. Love, Debi
Comment from Neonewman
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Happy Birthday, Rhonda. I know you will enjoy this beautifully crafted, sentimental piece Debi has crafted. Debi, as usual, my friend. You've outdone yourself.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Steve, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her. This is the strangest one I think I ever have done, but she needed silly today. Haha.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for all your kind comments. Love, Debi
reply by Neonewman on 05-Nov-2024
    My pleasure, Debi. Things like you knew what she needed at this moment are what make you so special.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
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Another amazing poem! It is such a sweet birthday tribute to Rhonda! I love how it emphasizes how much she means to her friends with the line "Rhonda, your birthday means a lot." The playful references to music, like the yellow rose and flying to the moon, add a joyful touch that really captures the celebration.

The nod to Pat Boone and the fun mention of the "SmashUp and a big Balloon" bring a lighthearted vibe, while the personal note about Wayne <3 shows the love and support they share. Overall, it beautifully balances humor and heartfelt sentiment, making it a perfect birthday greeting to brighten her day! Love it!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Patty, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her, so thank you for saying something about it

    . This is the strangest one I think I ever have done, but she needed silly today. Haha.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for all your kind comments. Love, Debi
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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Another one of your great tribute poems. You should put them all together and publish them. Perhaps the powers that be at Fan Story might be interested in such a project.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hi Jake, I have one more to release in a couple hours at midnight here and then tomorrow I will get your last years poem on Word and send it to you. Ok?
    I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her. This is the strangest one I think I ever have done, but she needed silly today. Haha.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for all your kind comments. Love, Debi
Comment from nomi338
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Hear, hear, let us all cheer, have a shot or chug a beer. Rhonda's day is finally here. The joy on our face is plain and clear, Wayne's recovery we pray is near. This hope serves to allay our fear.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Awe, Nomi, you always have such kind things to say, and I am so appreciative of them. I I wanted something fun and different for Rhonda so I went with the two rhymed modified quatern. I was hoping that everyone noticed that all the songs I mentioned were all the videos I used for her.

    Thanks again for the kind comments and the gracious six stars,
    my sweet big brother. Love ya, Debi
reply by nomi338 on 04-Nov-2024
    Fear not. It may not be that your reviewers were oblivious, sometimes the words are so obvious people fail to see a message that is in plain sight but requires a second look.