Willing Hearts
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
it appears that things are winding down. I hope that they can make a go of it. Of course the time they've spent together is still like a honeymoon phase. Eventually real life will set in, and we'll see how they do.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Hello Barbara,
it appears that things are winding down. I hope that they can make a go of it. Of course the time they've spent together is still like a honeymoon phase. Eventually real life will set in, and we'll see how they do.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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So true. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
As it has always been, this has been thoroughly enjoyable with your writing. Just a couple of spags this time around."In(space)case its different,
"It'(s) ready." Sami glanced at Jose
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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As it has always been, this has been thoroughly enjoyable with your writing. Just a couple of spags this time around."In(space)case its different,
"It'(s) ready." Sami glanced at Jose
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I have made the corrections. I appreciate the help and the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
Well, it seems that everything is finishing up quite smoothly. Looking back, they have all meshed together pretty well throughout the duration. Another well written chapter.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Well, it seems that everything is finishing up quite smoothly. Looking back, they have all meshed together pretty well throughout the duration. Another well written chapter.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This feels like a last chapter, they are saying goodbye with their memories and until the next to last chapter, there is no suggestion more is going to happen. It might be better if there were more hints of more to come, if there is. One sentence missing word: she tilts (her) head.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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This feels like a last chapter, they are saying goodbye with their memories and until the next to last chapter, there is no suggestion more is going to happen. It might be better if there were more hints of more to come, if there is. One sentence missing word: she tilts (her) head.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Those little words will be the death of me. LOL Thank you for the catch. I appreciate it.
Comment from Paul McFarland
No calamities. That was good. It looks like Noah's and Sami's relationship is air tight. I think you said that there would be another bump or two in the road. I'm ready for closure.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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No calamities. That was good. It looks like Noah's and Sami's relationship is air tight. I think you said that there would be another bump or two in the road. I'm ready for closure.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Another bump in the road coming soon, then tying up loose ends. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
Another chapter I enjoyed very much. That latter part of the story reminded me of one of those TV shows that ended its run and they have a special where everyone gets together and talks over that series. Before this ends entirely, please consider a Noah-Sami series.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Another chapter I enjoyed very much. That latter part of the story reminded me of one of those TV shows that ended its run and they have a special where everyone gets together and talks over that series. Before this ends entirely, please consider a Noah-Sami series.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. But once Noah and Sami get together, where would the story be?
Comment from lancellot
A very well written chapter. It showcases how nice and kind and friendly every character is. I know it's your formula, but there weren't any 'real' obstacles to their relationship, and really still isn't. They were both good, nice, single people, who saw each other, every single day.
Notes:
Mid-afternoon, Noah came into the kitchen. "Sami, I need a break. Do you have time for a walk?"
- Just saying. They go on way too many walks.
"In order to open my heart to love, I need to change."
-Why? Isn't he already in love?
Noah kissed her. "You've broken through every wall I'd built. It's a little scary, but I'm glad you did."
-What walls? It was easy as pie. Sami was the only 'available' woman in the house.
It's a little scary
-Why? He isn't a teenage virgin. Why would a man his age say or admit this?
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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A very well written chapter. It showcases how nice and kind and friendly every character is. I know it's your formula, but there weren't any 'real' obstacles to their relationship, and really still isn't. They were both good, nice, single people, who saw each other, every single day.
Notes:
Mid-afternoon, Noah came into the kitchen. "Sami, I need a break. Do you have time for a walk?"
- Just saying. They go on way too many walks.
"In order to open my heart to love, I need to change."
-Why? Isn't he already in love?
Noah kissed her. "You've broken through every wall I'd built. It's a little scary, but I'm glad you did."
-What walls? It was easy as pie. Sami was the only 'available' woman in the house.
It's a little scary
-Why? He isn't a teenage virgin. Why would a man his age say or admit this?
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I have too much to say to your comments, but I know I'd be wasting my time so thank you.
Comment from Ulla
I for one certainly hope she can trust him. We'll see. It's a great chapter, Barbara, and I have a feeling the book is coming to an end. I only saw one thing you had an it' that needs an s attached to it. Hugs, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I for one certainly hope she can trust him. We'll see. It's a great chapter, Barbara, and I have a feeling the book is coming to an end. I only saw one thing you had an it' that needs an s attached to it. Hugs, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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It should end in the middle or maybe towards the end of January. Tying up the loose ends. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is another great chapter. It was neat how they went around and said there regrets and likes about being there. Now I am anxiously waiting to see what's up Noah's sleeve! Another great job! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Barbara, This is another great chapter. It was neat how they went around and said there regrets and likes about being there. Now I am anxiously waiting to see what's up Noah's sleeve! Another great job! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Noah does have an idea up his sleeve. I wonder if it'll work out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Awesome and effective dialogue in this little wrap-up gem (tied yup a few loose ends).
Here:
Incase it's different, what do you regret?" She tilted head.
Should
Incase be in case?
Enjoyed this chapter!
D
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Awesome and effective dialogue in this little wrap-up gem (tied yup a few loose ends).
Here:
Incase it's different, what do you regret?" She tilted head.
Should
Incase be in case?
Enjoyed this chapter!
D
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Will check it out. Thank you for the kind review. I was reading your latest post as you were reading mine. I'm sure you're going to hate me after reading my review. So sorry!!!!