Thunderstorms
A poem about summer storms19 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Cecilia, like you...I have always been fascinated
with thunderstorms...and as of today...I play a
thunderstorm and rain cd when I go to bed at night...
the sound of rains play a very soothing song to me...
and it always cleans the air when it stops...
I'm not real crazy about the tornados that it brings...
but I lived in Florida 21 years...and was never in one...
about 8 hurricanes...but no tornados...thank God...
your a very talented writers...and I like the way you go
into detail with your wording...
I love your poem...picture perfect...very well written...
love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Hi Cecilia, like you...I have always been fascinated
with thunderstorms...and as of today...I play a
thunderstorm and rain cd when I go to bed at night...
the sound of rains play a very soothing song to me...
and it always cleans the air when it stops...
I'm not real crazy about the tornados that it brings...
but I lived in Florida 21 years...and was never in one...
about 8 hurricanes...but no tornados...thank God...
your a very talented writers...and I like the way you go
into detail with your wording...
I love your poem...picture perfect...very well written...
love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you Linda for the kind review. I'm honored you think I'm talented. I won't let it go to my head I promise.
I have been through some hurricanes to living in NC and HI. Those at least you can prepare for, tornados not so much.
We have been fortunate so far with the tornados. They haven't found us yet and I hope it stays that way. I have watched a tornado form and that's pretty cool, but scary at the same time.
Cecilia
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Hi Cecilia, I remember my husband
(passed)...called me on his cell phone...
told me he had a tornado not far behind him...I told him to stop and get pictures...well...it's a chance in a lifetime...LOL...
he never stopped...but he was ok...
I love your poems...and your so very
welcome...love ya...xxoo
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Sorry for your loss. He wouldn't get a picture for you, ha, ha. Where was his sense of humor.
Cecilia
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my sentiments exactly...🤣🤣
he was a railroad engineer...
passed at 54...he is very much missed...xxoo
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Linda,
I'm sorry. That is way too young.
Cecilia
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Your free verse poetry certainly exemplifies the path and the pattern of summer thunderstorm. I've been in thunderstorms that turned into tornadoes. They're not as much fun. This is a very well-done free verse poem.
Robert
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Your free verse poetry certainly exemplifies the path and the pattern of summer thunderstorm. I've been in thunderstorms that turned into tornadoes. They're not as much fun. This is a very well-done free verse poem.
Robert
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Robert,
Thank you for your kind review.
Cecilia
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You're welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
It's always a delight when the storm passes, cleansing the atmosphere so that the sun can peek out and survey the scene. Your free rhyming verse vividly builds up this weather feature of thunder, releasing its rainfall in torrents before coming to its subdued and peaceful conclusion. Well done, Cecilia. Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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It's always a delight when the storm passes, cleansing the atmosphere so that the sun can peek out and survey the scene. Your free rhyming verse vividly builds up this weather feature of thunder, releasing its rainfall in torrents before coming to its subdued and peaceful conclusion. Well done, Cecilia. Debbie
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Hi Debbie,
Thank you for your kind review. It means a lot coming from you.
Cecilia
Comment from patcelaw
Summer thunderstorms can be very devastating to approach and also devastating to us as we fear the worst from them. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Have a good day and may God bless you. Patricia.A
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Summer thunderstorms can be very devastating to approach and also devastating to us as we fear the worst from them. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Have a good day and may God bless you. Patricia.A
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Patricia,
Thank you for the kind review.
Cecilia
Comment from royowen
I love thunderstorms, like a child, I snuggle under the bedclothes as I feel safe and laugh, I don't think I've felt fright, but some cyclones they get in the eastern states doesn't sound good, our weather is pretty stable here. Beautifully written Cecilia, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I love thunderstorms, like a child, I snuggle under the bedclothes as I feel safe and laugh, I don't think I've felt fright, but some cyclones they get in the eastern states doesn't sound good, our weather is pretty stable here. Beautifully written Cecilia, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Roy,
Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Cecilia
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written free form poem about summer thunderstorms. You used great descriptive words and amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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This is a very well written free form poem about summer thunderstorms. You used great descriptive words and amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Teri,
Thank you for the kind review.
Cecilia
Comment from DonandVicki
There was a time in my youth that I loved the sound of thunder and lightning, but now I southern California we do not get much of that or twister either. I enjoyed the flow of your poem.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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There was a time in my youth that I loved the sound of thunder and lightning, but now I southern California we do not get much of that or twister either. I enjoyed the flow of your poem.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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DonandVicki,
Thank you for the kind review. l love a good thunderstorm. Most of the tornados stay north of us in Oklahoma, which I'm thankful for.
Cecilia
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You revealed here your feelings as the storm hits, the anticipation of the storm when the lightning strikes and then the thunder and torrential rain. I love a good storm and you brought the drama in this poem Cecilia.
Adjustment here:
(Jagged (lightnning) lights up the sky)
Love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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You revealed here your feelings as the storm hits, the anticipation of the storm when the lightning strikes and then the thunder and torrential rain. I love a good storm and you brought the drama in this poem Cecilia.
Adjustment here:
(Jagged (lightnning) lights up the sky)
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and catching the error. I will fix it promptly.
Cecilia
Comment from Begin Again
Wow! It felt like I was there, and it was happening. I suppose living in tornado alley exposes you to lots of threatening storms, hopefully not directly. I like that the ending says the storm passed, leaving the sun peeking through the clouds. Great job!
The sunshine peaks through the clouds (peeks)
Back to writing....
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Wow! It felt like I was there, and it was happening. I suppose living in tornado alley exposes you to lots of threatening storms, hopefully not directly. I like that the ending says the storm passed, leaving the sun peeking through the clouds. Great job!
The sunshine peaks through the clouds (peeks)
Back to writing....
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Thank you my friend for the kind review and catching that error. I really appreciate it.
Cecilia
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No problem at all.
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Have a Blessed day my friend. You can't write that next chapter goofing off with me :)
Cecilia
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But I enjoyed it!