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The Ten Demandments

a poem

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Comment from lyenochka
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I know how you feel and it pains me that there are conspiracy spreaders who actually have made a case, even using Bible verses, saying that Trump is the Messiah. When Jesus has already come and saved us, it's shameful that people would believe such a thing. It's definitely idolatry as you point out.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    I find Americans are dumber than I thought.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Bill,

Sadly, your ten will not be favored by the Trumpers. Honestly, methinks they will likely agree that he has many, many faults. Lying about facts and the American way of life IMHO are his most heinous acts.

His early announced nominations for Cabinet posts may actually help the democratic causes in the Congress since some of his acolytes will no longer be voting for progressive laws.

Mark

Do like your twist for your 'demandments.'

Mark

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    I will get this off my chest soon.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL! Honestly, I hope your address is secret, you don't want anyone coming knocking on your door after dark! LOL, Bill, you are hillarious. I loved this. Well done!! :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    It is they who do not want to come to my door, Sandra.
Comment from Amelie Johns
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Thanks for sharing this humorous poem, it gave me a laugh. You are not holding back which is great. I don't have much of a political opinion and I'm out of the loop with the election in your country. But I was nonetheless surprised with the outcome. I hope he gets to the bottom of the possible UFO cover-up. That story is doing the rounds in my country.

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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    All UFO stuff is BS.
reply by Amelie Johns on 12-Nov-2024
    I thought so too until I saw one two years ago. Yes, know how I sound!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I'm gonna hang this on my wall so I'm sure to follow the Demandments or I will be sent to Mar a Lago to atone by doing housework. Great job. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Go and sin no more than you can lie about in the modern season of alternative truth.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I love how bold this is! You really pack a punch. I like the way you highlight the contradictions and exaggerate them. The humor shines through. It's clever and makes a point about Trump without holding back! Keep up the great work!

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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Trump is totally unchained. The Constitution has no defenders: Executive branch, legislative branch, and judicial branch all wait for orders.