My Aunt Margaret
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Comment from patcelaw
I'm sure that opening that box must've been opening to you to say the least. I enjoyed your story very much and it flows very well when it is read aloud your punctuation your sentence structure and your paragraphing is all very well done have a good day and have a wonderful weekend.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I'm sure that opening that box must've been opening to you to say the least. I enjoyed your story very much and it flows very well when it is read aloud your punctuation your sentence structure and your paragraphing is all very well done have a good day and have a wonderful weekend.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the high Praise. This is a different way of writing for me. I have written four chapters so far. We will see how far it. does. Again, Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from jim vecchio
I had a beloved Aunt Margaret, but she was a quiet woman of Italian descent. Somehow I thought this Aunt Margret would be different. I enjoyed this nd now am looking forward to see what happens next.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I had a beloved Aunt Margaret, but she was a quiet woman of Italian descent. Somehow I thought this Aunt Margret would be different. I enjoyed this nd now am looking forward to see what happens next.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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This is a different way of writing for me. I have written four chapters so far. We will see how far it. does. Again, Thanks for the read. Karen
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I hope it goes on long after those four!
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Thanks sweetie. I am working on # five.
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Great!
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Now where are all those sixes when I need one most. Damn it! I guess I'm just reading way too many people, because I'm usually out by Monday or Tuesday. But I'm sure disappointed I don't have one today. I think I know what you'd truly like to be. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Now where are all those sixes when I need one most. Damn it! I guess I'm just reading way too many people, because I'm usually out by Monday or Tuesday. But I'm sure disappointed I don't have one today. I think I know what you'd truly like to be. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the high Praise. This is a different way of writing for me. I have written four chapters so far. We will see how far it. does. Again, Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from karenina
This is another facet of KCT that intrigues me! Your wit, observations, and pithy sentences are a trademark, and imagine my surprise when this continued evolving into a darker and darker tale!
I'm on board, my friend. Please remit tickets for the full ride!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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This is another facet of KCT that intrigues me! Your wit, observations, and pithy sentences are a trademark, and imagine my surprise when this continued evolving into a darker and darker tale!
I'm on board, my friend. Please remit tickets for the full ride!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the high Praise. This is a different way of writing for me. I have written four chapters so far. We will see how far it. does. Again, Thanks for the read. Karen
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You could write in any genre...
I mean it!
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I have not mastered westerns, or scripts. And some poetry styles seem unduly hard. But I sure thank you for your kindness. Karen
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These are merely new worlds to conquer! Carry on!
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#4 will drop later today when I have earned enough promotion points from reviewing. Karen
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi the story was so interesting. You have a wild imagination. So in the box, could be a hand? You have me intrigued. Great writing and suspense. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Hi the story was so interesting. You have a wild imagination. So in the box, could be a hand? You have me intrigued. Great writing and suspense. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the high Praise. This is a different way of writing for me. I have written four chapters so far. We will see how far it. does. Again, Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, I read this two out of order, but still followed. I am into this story.
My Mom requested we remove my fathers name. (My mom & father's name)
I think I fainted. I drank some of my water , and took some aspirin. (comma closer to 'water,')
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Okay, I read this two out of order, but still followed. I am into this story.
My Mom requested we remove my fathers name. (My mom & father's name)
I think I fainted. I drank some of my water , and took some aspirin. (comma closer to 'water,')
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I went in and edited some more. Thanks for the help. And many thanks for reading my stuff. Karen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a wonderful read, Karen! I'm into this story and want to read more (please). Your prose style with the punchy sentences always makes reading so effortless. And your humour, as with the foot rub, is a delight. One thing that's confused me is ...who's Aunt Martha? "When I first moved in with Aunt Martha we lived in Vermont..."
But a great, entertaining read ending with a very inviting hook! Well done. Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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What a wonderful read, Karen! I'm into this story and want to read more (please). Your prose style with the punchy sentences always makes reading so effortless. And your humour, as with the foot rub, is a delight. One thing that's confused me is ...who's Aunt Martha? "When I first moved in with Aunt Martha we lived in Vermont..."
But a great, entertaining read ending with a very inviting hook! Well done. Debbie
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Fixed the error, Thanks. Thanks so much for the high Praise. This is a different way of writing for me. I have written four chapters so far. We will see how far it. does. Again, Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a brilliant start to a brilliant novel! Karen, this is great. And just to be frank, if those were the people she was murdering, I would have joined her wholeheartedly!!! I can't wait to find out what was in that box, I'm hoping I will find out very quickly!! Well done, my friend. I loved this. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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What a brilliant start to a brilliant novel! Karen, this is great. And just to be frank, if those were the people she was murdering, I would have joined her wholeheartedly!!! I can't wait to find out what was in that box, I'm hoping I will find out very quickly!! Well done, my friend. I loved this. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the high Praise. This is a different way of writing for me. I have written four chapters so far. We will see how far it. does. Again, Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
omg that was almost too disturbing at the end. Not sure if that section about the baby requires a warning or not but it was on the edge for me. Love the premise you came up with and can't wait to see what was in those boxes! Great job.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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omg that was almost too disturbing at the end. Not sure if that section about the baby requires a warning or not but it was on the edge for me. Love the premise you came up with and can't wait to see what was in those boxes! Great job.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the Praise. Should I take it out?This is a different way of writing for me. I have written four chapters so far. We will see how far it. does. Again, Thanks for the read. Karen
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no, dont take it out but see if anyone else thinks it needs a warning. it was pretty rough lol I wasn't ready! lol
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Thank you
Comment from Tom Horonzy
and there it is... the intro to a series, perhaps. Good luck and carry on. I tag along as time permits. Was she and them lizzie borden types, doing damage with an axe or are/were they more strategic/
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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and there it is... the intro to a series, perhaps. Good luck and carry on. I tag along as time permits. Was she and them lizzie borden types, doing damage with an axe or are/were they more strategic/
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the Praise. This is a different way of writing for me. I have written four chapters so far. We will see how far it. does. Again, Thanks for the read. Karen
