My Aunt Margaret
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Comment from Ric Myworld
You tell a mean story, and I enjoy every single one. Now, I'm just waiting for you to take us through every step and put us right in the middle of the action. I'm just afraid it might work it's way into the horror genre. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine story.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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You tell a mean story, and I enjoy every single one. Now, I'm just waiting for you to take us through every step and put us right in the middle of the action. I'm just afraid it might work it's way into the horror genre. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine story.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen -
Comment from karenina
Good job, because I hate the little bugger. Already I'm thinking whatever becomes of him isn't nearly evil enough. (Smiling as I embrace my dark side)--
Your punchy lines and quick pace are perfect for this book. The possibilities are endless as the caliber of dirtbag men who get their jollies belittling, robbing, and ruining women.
Go get them!
I know your creative mind and fearlessness. I'm strapping in for a wild ride!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Good job, because I hate the little bugger. Already I'm thinking whatever becomes of him isn't nearly evil enough. (Smiling as I embrace my dark side)--
Your punchy lines and quick pace are perfect for this book. The possibilities are endless as the caliber of dirtbag men who get their jollies belittling, robbing, and ruining women.
Go get them!
I know your creative mind and fearlessness. I'm strapping in for a wild ride!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen -
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My pleasure!
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I am reviewing to get enough points to post #3 Karen
Comment from royowen
I can't wait to find out how Kenneth Moore fell in the proverbial ditch of human excrement. Kenneth Moore was the name of a famous British actor, of some years ago. There have been.a few unscrupulous characters like he, so well done Karen, good post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I can't wait to find out how Kenneth Moore fell in the proverbial ditch of human excrement. Kenneth Moore was the name of a famous British actor, of some years ago. There have been.a few unscrupulous characters like he, so well done Karen, good post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Yes, Jim vecchio pointed it out too. I like that actor. Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen -
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well done
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to see how he did it. This is a good write.
My Aunt couldn't wait to tell her best friend (My aunt)
So, my Aunt Margaret did what she did. (omit 'my' we already know who she is.)
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I can't wait to see how he did it. This is a good write.
My Aunt couldn't wait to tell her best friend (My aunt)
So, my Aunt Margaret did what she did. (omit 'my' we already know who she is.)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks for the edits. Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen -
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, yes!! I want to know what Aunt Margaret did to him. I hate men like that! Men who have egos higher than their bank balances, are a plague. Your story is progressing very well, my friend. I look forward to the next chapter. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Oh, yes!! I want to know what Aunt Margaret did to him. I hate men like that! Men who have egos higher than their bank balances, are a plague. Your story is progressing very well, my friend. I look forward to the next chapter. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen -
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Well...tell me already! lol Good build-up to the first murder and interesting back story. He was definitely a good one for her to start with. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Well...tell me already! lol Good build-up to the first murder and interesting back story. He was definitely a good one for her to start with. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, carry on my pen-in-hand-friend, though that isn't done any longer, is it. This is either a captivating start or... i missed earlier releases, but here I sit with bated breath.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Well, carry on my pen-in-hand-friend, though that isn't done any longer, is it. This is either a captivating start or... i missed earlier releases, but here I sit with bated breath.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Begin Again
Well done, Karen. The story is very intriguing and keeps the reader wrapped up from start to finish. I am enjoying it very much. Can't wait for the next one.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Well done, Karen. The story is very intriguing and keeps the reader wrapped up from start to finish. I am enjoying it very much. Can't wait for the next one.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from GWHARGIS
The aunt is a very smart and detail oriented individual. I like her purpose. Good investigative techniques with the booze and money. Bet our newspapers could learn a thing or two. Lol. I'm enjoying this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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The aunt is a very smart and detail oriented individual. I like her purpose. Good investigative techniques with the booze and money. Bet our newspapers could learn a thing or two. Lol. I'm enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Margaret did not like killing. She tried to avoid it, but, if she reasoned that they would never stop, she dispatched them to the place that gives the pain. We will see what her daughter does with the information. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice story going.
A user of women. - I like that you don't have to be famous to break grammar rules.
My Aunt couldn't wait to tell her best friend Misty all about - needs commas surrounding 'Misty'.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Nice story going.
A user of women. - I like that you don't have to be famous to break grammar rules.
My Aunt couldn't wait to tell her best friend Misty all about - needs commas surrounding 'Misty'.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks for the edit. I will check. I have four written so far . there could be more. Karen