Miracles
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Comment from lyenochka
Ah, you kept the best part about the pregnancy hidden from the readers and the characters until now. How great that the baby is Donatelli's and not that of the rapist! And so there will be much rejoicing after Rossi is dealt with and Matthew gets his memory back!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Ah, you kept the best part about the pregnancy hidden from the readers and the characters until now. How great that the baby is Donatelli's and not that of the rapist! And so there will be much rejoicing after Rossi is dealt with and Matthew gets his memory back!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! I don't know how you come up with all the details you put into your novels. Just when I think I can guess what's going to happen, you add another twist. I was glad Jenna's baby was 28 weeks, but then it was only 2.5 pounds and needed a blood transfusion of AB negative blood. Oh no. But Wala! Donatelli has AB negative blood. Once again, you saved the day. This is incredible storytelling.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Wow! I don't know how you come up with all the details you put into your novels. Just when I think I can guess what's going to happen, you add another twist. I was glad Jenna's baby was 28 weeks, but then it was only 2.5 pounds and needed a blood transfusion of AB negative blood. Oh no. But Wala! Donatelli has AB negative blood. Once again, you saved the day. This is incredible storytelling.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess we'll never know for sure until you decide to tell us. LOL. But lucky for us, it won't be too long before you let the cat out of the bag so to speak. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I guess we'll never know for sure until you decide to tell us. LOL. But lucky for us, it won't be too long before you let the cat out of the bag so to speak. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
When I get chills and the hairs on my arms stand up, it's a six! This was another very dramatic chapter, but so far they have everything under control. There'll be a massive fight, but they'll all come through. Great chapter!
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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When I get chills and the hairs on my arms stand up, it's a six! This was another very dramatic chapter, but so far they have everything under control. There'll be a massive fight, but they'll all come through. Great chapter!
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Eleanor has a new granddaughter, and Rossi is at the gate to get Donatelli. So much happening in this chapter! So Matthew is the father of this baby! Maybe seeing the baby will heal his memory. Another nice chapter. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Eleanor has a new granddaughter, and Rossi is at the gate to get Donatelli. So much happening in this chapter! So Matthew is the father of this baby! Maybe seeing the baby will heal his memory. Another nice chapter. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, Matthew is the father of Jenna's baby. I had an idea, that he was. I'm glad and I'm pretty sure this will help Matthew heal. I can't imagine it won't. Now for the ongoing war. We need to get that settled.
Her eyes fluttered open when he softly called her. "Rebecca." (her,)
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Yes, Matthew is the father of Jenna's baby. I had an idea, that he was. I'm glad and I'm pretty sure this will help Matthew heal. I can't imagine it won't. Now for the ongoing war. We need to get that settled.
Her eyes fluttered open when he softly called her. "Rebecca." (her,)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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fixed....
Thanks for the help and support. Appreciate the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Of Course it is!!! Everything is coming together nicely, Carol. Once Matthew comes round properly, sees Jenna and the baby, he will then know who he is. But I hope he doesn't remember that cuddle with Garth until after that is straightened out! OH, and Garth, he's in love with Rebecca!! And she loves him! WooHoo!! I must make sure you get a six for your final chapter. Which should be Saturday and I'll read it Sunday. Can't wait to hear the next part! Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
I had my eyes screaned today, so they are a bit blurry, the operation should be about a month's time. I hope so. I'm now using my Voice Aloud program to hear the stories. It's not bad either. I might continue with it.
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Of Course it is!!! Everything is coming together nicely, Carol. Once Matthew comes round properly, sees Jenna and the baby, he will then know who he is. But I hope he doesn't remember that cuddle with Garth until after that is straightened out! OH, and Garth, he's in love with Rebecca!! And she loves him! WooHoo!! I must make sure you get a six for your final chapter. Which should be Saturday and I'll read it Sunday. Can't wait to hear the next part! Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
I had my eyes screaned today, so they are a bit blurry, the operation should be about a month's time. I hope so. I'm now using my Voice Aloud program to hear the stories. It's not bad either. I might continue with it.
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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You've got more faith in me than I do. There's a lot of loose ends to tie up and only five days to go. And Thanksgiving in between. Ugh! Now tell me what they are actually going to do to your eyes? And this Voice Aloud program sounds awesome. Writing and trying to review has made my eyes really strained. I'm sitting her looking at 111 reviews that need thank-yous, 20 stories that need read, and how many chapters I need to write and post. Have I lost my mind on this one? Love you as always, Carol
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It's a Microsoft program. I copy and past the piece over and then click on REEAD ALOUD I put in the wrong name. It's brilliant. I have tried to put it on here, (FS) I'm sure there is a way. I'll have to enlist my granddaughter'd help again. 😂🥰
Comment from Tim Margetts
OK, you get twistier and twistier. At places, I lost track of the plot, who exactly is where in the place but I think I have it sorted in my brain, maybe.
Well, I am sure it will work out in the next episode :)
Tim x
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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OK, you get twistier and twistier. At places, I lost track of the plot, who exactly is where in the place but I think I have it sorted in my brain, maybe.
Well, I am sure it will work out in the next episode :)
Tim x
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Good morning! Thanks for enjoying the story. I appreciate your time and kindness. Writing a novel in a month is becoming a "hectic" chore. (Especially with holidays and a vacation).
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another stellar chapter. I was hoping Donatelli was the dad. How how the plot thickens my friend. Now all they have to do is deal with Rossi and his clan. Girl you got me on the edge of the seat where I alway stay.
Well done my friend
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Another stellar chapter. I was hoping Donatelli was the dad. How how the plot thickens my friend. Now all they have to do is deal with Rossi and his clan. Girl you got me on the edge of the seat where I alway stay.
Well done my friend
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Cecilia, I am about to pull my hair out of my head trying how to bring this story altogether in five days and celebrate Thanksgiving with all the cooking, etc. It's going to take a MIRACLE! Just like the book! LOL I think I am going to have to cut and paste because I'm 125 behind at this very moment and after today it will be more. Thanks for loving the story though! It's a "refreshing bit of medicine" for this headache of mine.
Hugs, Carol
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Carol,
You need to take a deep breath and relax a little bit. I bet it's madness at your house write now. Why are you behind? Do you have a publishing deadline?
I'm sorry you have a headache and I hope you feel better soon. Stress will do that to a girl.
Love you lots
Cecilia
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This novel I am writing is in a FanStory contest of writing a novel in 30 days...It ends on the 30th so I have five days to finish it. Normally, that's not a problem and I've written one in two weeks, but being here with the girls and traveling, not to mention this story is far more complicated. Unfinished Brushstrokes was written in two weeks in one of these contests. smiles...
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I'm trying to remember all the loose ends...waking Donatelli up, catching Rossi, finishing off Doyle, Rebecca and Garth, Miriam -Rebecca's mother, and Rebecca's letters. Oh yeah, celebrating a baby! Did miss anything?
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Carol,
Nope I think you got it all figured out. Looking forward to more chapters :)
Cecilia
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Okay girl your times running it out. You just might have to burn the midnight candle and catch a nap when you can. I have faith you will get it finished. You're a sure winner for that contest.
Cecilia
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Thanks! I sure am giving it my best! And how can I lose with supporters cheering me on...You go girl!
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Carol,
I got you girl. Keep writing.
Cecilia