Miracles
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Comment from lyenochka
I like how you have both Lexington and Frankie sound believable as mafia types and yet we know that they have something trustworthy about them that they can make this transaction work. I wonder if Frank has the diamonds that everyone thinks that Doyle has.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I like how you have both Lexington and Frankie sound believable as mafia types and yet we know that they have something trustworthy about them that they can make this transaction work. I wonder if Frank has the diamonds that everyone thinks that Doyle has.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Let's hope Lexington will be trustworthy and will keep his word. But I am curious as to the deal Frank made with him. They will all have to have cool heads and quick thinking over the next few hours. Another fine chapter.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Let's hope Lexington will be trustworthy and will keep his word. But I am curious as to the deal Frank made with him. They will all have to have cool heads and quick thinking over the next few hours. Another fine chapter.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
You have more convolutions and twists than a super coaster at Disney land.
Why do I not trust Lexington?
Why is Donatelli being so tough a nut to crack?
Next...
Tim x
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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You have more convolutions and twists than a super coaster at Disney land.
Why do I not trust Lexington?
Why is Donatelli being so tough a nut to crack?
Next...
Tim x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Girl now you got me all curious about the deal. You're killing me with all this suspense. This is a great chapter and usual you left me sitting on the edge.
Well done.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Girl now you got me all curious about the deal. You're killing me with all this suspense. This is a great chapter and usual you left me sitting on the edge.
Well done.
Cecilia
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Carol,
I hear you my friend. Even the 13 replies in overwhelming. I can't imagine over 250. No doubt you're cross-eyed. You should just do a generic statement and copy and paste, so you can get caught up.
Cecilia xoxo
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I've got 65 more to go.... They might just get a Thank you.... I don't ever want to get this far behind again. I appreciate those who have read and enjoyed, but trying to cram all the writing, the reading and the answering is way over my head.
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Carol,
I can only imagine. You go girl you're you're almost there.
Cecilia
Cecilia
Comment from barbara.wilkey
There's a certain honor amongst thieves. I hope it plays out here. I can't wait to find out.
Sam snapped. "You can take your bullets and shove --" (snapped,)
While you take care of that, I've got a few decisions to make. (make.")
" He glanced out the window and turned back, "I'm sorry. Do I know you?" (back.)
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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There's a certain honor amongst thieves. I hope it plays out here. I can't wait to find out.
Sam snapped. "You can take your bullets and shove --" (snapped,)
While you take care of that, I've got a few decisions to make. (make.")
" He glanced out the window and turned back, "I'm sorry. Do I know you?" (back.)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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fixed....
thanks for enjoying my efforts. It's been a fun story to write.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Frankie has pulled off a deal with Lexington, and little Maggie will be saved (if the blood is the right kind, of course.) I hope Lexington is able to keep his word about turning Rossi over to Garth. One small fix: "A (deal's) a deal." Good chapter, and good dialogues. Blessings. Carol
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Frankie has pulled off a deal with Lexington, and little Maggie will be saved (if the blood is the right kind, of course.) I hope Lexington is able to keep his word about turning Rossi over to Garth. One small fix: "A (deal's) a deal." Good chapter, and good dialogues. Blessings. Carol
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Fixed...
I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, what a thrilling chapter! I love how the tension builds. It really kept me on edge. I love when Garth stepped in to defend Jenna. This story has such emotion and conflict. I'm eager to see how everything unfolds. Fantastic work!
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Wow, what a thrilling chapter! I love how the tension builds. It really kept me on edge. I love when Garth stepped in to defend Jenna. This story has such emotion and conflict. I'm eager to see how everything unfolds. Fantastic work!
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Michael for reading this chapter and for the kind comments. I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. Appreciate the review.
Smiles, Carol