Unwanted visitors
A Couplet16 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Couplets are my demise! Very difficult to do in story form but you did a good job. Accurately described male monster. Thanks for sharing. Would have done well in a contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
Couplets are my demise! Very difficult to do in story form but you did a good job. Accurately described male monster. Thanks for sharing. Would have done well in a contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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I won't do blind ones anymore until at the end of the contest they go to the mailboxes automatically. Paying for the right to have our stories not read is ridiculous.
Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I kind of got sidetracked on this poem, my mind stuck on the beautiful redhead. Not something that happens much anymore. But the perfect imperfections, facial lines coming with age, uneven, freckled skin between her cleavage, or lack thereof. The joy what I can see, envisioning what I can't. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
Well, I kind of got sidetracked on this poem, my mind stuck on the beautiful redhead. Not something that happens much anymore. But the perfect imperfections, facial lines coming with age, uneven, freckled skin between her cleavage, or lack thereof. The joy what I can see, envisioning what I can't. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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A few folks pointed out the photo matched the icon. And wanted to know if that was the real me. Fools, she is too tall, and has no boobage. But, she has a strong aura of style and grace. I went out today wearing my Mickey mouse hoodie It has ears. My sister said I wouldn't so of course I did. My other sister( in law) bought it for me. It made people smile. My work was done for the day. If anyone gave me a look that said "you are much too old for this". I simply put on the hood with the ears. Take that! My sister was smiling all day. Thanks for the read. Karen
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And now you've made me smile. You've done your good deeds for the day. Laughter is truly the best medicine for everything! :-)
Comment from Tim Margetts
I agree on the blind thing, while blind can have benefits of a kind, its a false security. And I feel, if a piece is entered in a blind contest, then after the result it should automatically get sent to friends message boxes.
After all, I want to see and read my friends work. It's why I have them on my friends list.
As an aside, is the picture you or random, if you then your caricature is awesomely accurate to the photo.
Tim x
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
I agree on the blind thing, while blind can have benefits of a kind, its a false security. And I feel, if a piece is entered in a blind contest, then after the result it should automatically get sent to friends message boxes.
After all, I want to see and read my friends work. It's why I have them on my friends list.
As an aside, is the picture you or random, if you then your caricature is awesomely accurate to the photo.
Tim x
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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The icon and the picture are a wonderful match aren't they? And, I agree with you. Thanks for the read,
Karen
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Karen,
This is a an awesome couplet poem. It speaks loud and clear you just have to read between the lines. This would have been a good one for the couplet contest.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
Karen,
This is a an awesome couplet poem. It speaks loud and clear you just have to read between the lines. This would have been a good one for the couplet contest.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Yes, But I am not paying $5.50 so my friends cannot have my writing do to their boxes. That is stupid.
And this little bugger was tough to do. Thanks for the read. Karen
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Karen,
Your welcome
Cecilia
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:-)
Comment from Begin Again
There are always those men who think of themselves and never understand when suddenly their pompous world dissolves right in front of them. He probably deserved worse but the divorce was a good start.... and a good settlement wouldn't hurt either.
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
There are always those men who think of themselves and never understand when suddenly their pompous world dissolves right in front of them. He probably deserved worse but the divorce was a good start.... and a good settlement wouldn't hurt either.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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No settlement, no money, He stole my savings, Didn't pay the mortgage so we lost the house, he sold or ruined most of my safely packed collections I accued to sell off to set me up for my golden years. He is a demon from hell. And, he cashed in the value of our insurance policy on him. He is a rat fink. Karen
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Karen.
-Your notes are appreciated, and I understand
where you are coming from.
-You do a good job describing this person
who is unwanted and obviously isn't very much liked.
-He is someone who always wants and also takes.
-I think the right conclusion was reached about this guy.
-Well done.
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Karen.
-Your notes are appreciated, and I understand
where you are coming from.
-You do a good job describing this person
who is unwanted and obviously isn't very much liked.
-He is someone who always wants and also takes.
-I think the right conclusion was reached about this guy.
-Well done.
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. I am working on number five. Havilland King is gonna get it. Karen
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You are very welcome.
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