Miracles
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Comment from lyenochka
I guess Danni is fluent in Italian to read the letters! I recognize your theme of twins from your novel in the Vineyard. And using letters is a great way to cover some background like you did with Eleanor's letters which explained a lot to Jenna. I would have thought Garth should be happy to meet Allie's sister. It would be like staying in the family.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I guess Danni is fluent in Italian to read the letters! I recognize your theme of twins from your novel in the Vineyard. And using letters is a great way to cover some background like you did with Eleanor's letters which explained a lot to Jenna. I would have thought Garth should be happy to meet Allie's sister. It would be like staying in the family.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
Falling in love with Rebecca makes sense. Certainly to me, flesh of flesh, twins are close in so many ways, I watched an English show about children separated from their mothers or fathers, and siblings and become reunited much later, it's a real tearjerker, but it tells the bond between parents and siblings is unbreakable, beautifully written great twist, Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Falling in love with Rebecca makes sense. Certainly to me, flesh of flesh, twins are close in so many ways, I watched an English show about children separated from their mothers or fathers, and siblings and become reunited much later, it's a real tearjerker, but it tells the bond between parents and siblings is unbreakable, beautifully written great twist, Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You sent several of these dear girl, pull it back a bit.
Comment from LJbutterfly
OMG! This close to the end, surprises are still popping up. I had forgotten that many chapters ago Eleanor saw a picture of someone she knew, but didn't say anything.
In the beginning of the novel, when Rebecca found out she had a twin sister, did you know at that time it would be Allie, or did that thought materialize as you were writing? In any event, Garth has a tough decision to make.
I want to tell you to relax, but I know Thanksgiving is tomorrow, and the end of the month is here. I don't know how much more you want to cover, but I do know that on December 1st you should take a break. I wish you the best in the contest. I'm sure you put in the most work.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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OMG! This close to the end, surprises are still popping up. I had forgotten that many chapters ago Eleanor saw a picture of someone she knew, but didn't say anything.
In the beginning of the novel, when Rebecca found out she had a twin sister, did you know at that time it would be Allie, or did that thought materialize as you were writing? In any event, Garth has a tough decision to make.
I want to tell you to relax, but I know Thanksgiving is tomorrow, and the end of the month is here. I don't know how much more you want to cover, but I do know that on December 1st you should take a break. I wish you the best in the contest. I'm sure you put in the most work.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Gayla putnam
The plot thickens. It's a fascinating saga. I liked how you used the letters to create a bond between the mother and daughter and inform the other characters in the story of past events. It's like a good soap on TV, and I await your next chapter.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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The plot thickens. It's a fascinating saga. I liked how you used the letters to create a bond between the mother and daughter and inform the other characters in the story of past events. It's like a good soap on TV, and I await your next chapter.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
My Cowboy needs a more than a little help. He's going to need a lot of help. I do believe it will all work out perfectly. I enjoyed reading.
Tango shot a glance at Danni before answering. "Because no one knew, n (answered,)
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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My Cowboy needs a more than a little help. He's going to need a lot of help. I do believe it will all work out perfectly. I enjoyed reading.
Tango shot a glance at Danni before answering. "Because no one knew, n (answered,)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, Carol! This was incredibly sad. That both had to give up their children. That is so hard. I'm hoping Allie will come to him, and tell him it's alright. Of course he's going to love her, they are the same, loving, beautiful women, and both love Garth. Not a bad thing in my mind. But Garth must work it out. This was a sad chapter, my friend, but you wrote it perfectly. Well done. I wish I could give everyone of your chapters a six, they all deserve it. Now to wait again, but not for too long. Love and hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Oh, Carol! This was incredibly sad. That both had to give up their children. That is so hard. I'm hoping Allie will come to him, and tell him it's alright. Of course he's going to love her, they are the same, loving, beautiful women, and both love Garth. Not a bad thing in my mind. But Garth must work it out. This was a sad chapter, my friend, but you wrote it perfectly. Well done. I wish I could give everyone of your chapters a six, they all deserve it. Now to wait again, but not for too long. Love and hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hello, my sweet friend. I have written 2/3 of the next chapter. It's taking me so long to read for the $$$ and then write and post. I'm currently 164 reviews behind. I'm afraid I am going to have to send a cut and paste, which I hate... I've still got cooking prep to do. Busy! Busy! I think there are about 3 or 4 chapters, so it's cutting it close. The last ones are the hardest because they are so emotional. The ups and downs... and they aren't deserving gangsters. LOL, So off I go again... I just had to answer you, though. Thanks for all the support, and believe me, I appreciate any virtual 6.
Love you always, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
My wonderful friend you always leave me hanging and that is what makes you a great author. Leaving the reader wanting more. I know you are on a tight schedule, but I have faith you can do it. I would tell you to relax, however I know you won't until your finished. I'm so excited I can't wait for the ending.
Have yourself a Happy Thanksgiving if I don't talk you before then.
Awesome job as usual.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Carol,
My wonderful friend you always leave me hanging and that is what makes you a great author. Leaving the reader wanting more. I know you are on a tight schedule, but I have faith you can do it. I would tell you to relax, however I know you won't until your finished. I'm so excited I can't wait for the ending.
Have yourself a Happy Thanksgiving if I don't talk you before then.
Awesome job as usual.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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I am so glad you were the first to review it. Tell me honestly...is the story holding your attention and moving as you thought...are there still surprises? I'm 2/3 through the next chapter, with about three more to follow. Tomorrow is iffy, so that leaves me Friday and Saturday for the finish. I'm so far behind on reviews since I must read so much to post... I think I will have to use a generic thank you, which I hate.... I'll need to be cooking soon, too! Happy Thanksgiving to you, love. Have a great day! Smiles and hugs, Carol
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I tthink other than Donatelli and Garth you pretty much have wrapped everything else up. Yes it is still holding my interest you are doing great. Concentrate on your book and don't worry about answering reviews until your book is complete. You first my friend. Hope you have a great Thanksgiving tomorrow and try to relax.
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
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Thanks...I've just been working on the rough draft of Donatelli and Garth's turmoil and also Eleanor seeing Doyle in prison...then it's the last chapter... It's getting closer...thanks.... Oh did you ever finish Unfinished BrushStrokes?
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Almost done with with Brush Strokes. My husband is unemployed right now and he's driving me crazy. I should finish tonight.
Cecilia
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Oh no! don't worry...I was just wondering what you thought...and you had the advantage of knowing the characters before you started to read because that one is the first of the three.
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It's great so far. I didn't expect anything less. :)
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You are so kind!
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Trying to decide if there will be another sequel to the third one or if everyone has had enough of Eleanor and the gang. Wouldn't be till January at least.
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I say keep going if you have it in you. I think they still have a lot left in them.
Cecilia