Herbert Hanover
Almost all alliteration25 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo and many kudos for the seemingly effortless story you have written with alliteration... I josh when I say effortless because it must have taken a lot of time and thought to put this together, something you appear to be excellent at doing. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Bravo and many kudos for the seemingly effortless story you have written with alliteration... I josh when I say effortless because it must have taken a lot of time and thought to put this together, something you appear to be excellent at doing. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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You are as sweet as can be. Yes, it is hard to do, but when I am done the feeling is wonderful. Or, maybe it is just my head has stopped hurting from when I bang it on the desk when I can't find a word. :-) thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from patcelaw
As I was reading this, my mind was going back to the Christmas, Carol and Scrooge and his reaction to Christmas. I wish you the very best with your writing and I also wish you a wonderful week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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As I was reading this, my mind was going back to the Christmas, Carol and Scrooge and his reaction to Christmas. I wish you the very best with your writing and I also wish you a wonderful week. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I was feeling sad about some of my not so nice experiences. But, dear heart, I also have a lot of good ones. I love my family. We are quirky. Our Momma loved jokes and saw funny everywhere. She also wrote.
I miss her. Happy Holidays. Karen
Comment from Tim Margetts
Wow Karen
Amazingly awesome achievements always astonish!
Absolutely applaudable artistry awakens admiration and awe. An ardent author, ambitious and audacious, aces again!
A thousand accolades await--astounding accomplishment! Always ascend, amazing ally!
Tim x
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Wow Karen
Amazingly awesome achievements always astonish!
Absolutely applaudable artistry awakens admiration and awe. An ardent author, ambitious and audacious, aces again!
A thousand accolades await--astounding accomplishment! Always ascend, amazing ally!
Tim x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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You are not half bad yourself. I have competition now.
Really, that was quite good. Thanks for the read, and special nod. Karen
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You love your alliteration, and you love those catchy names - this short story has both. Did you find the cartoon before or after you wrote this?
What letter is next, lol?
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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You love your alliteration, and you love those catchy names - this short story has both. Did you find the cartoon before or after you wrote this?
What letter is next, lol?
xo
Pam
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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After. I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to my standby, humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)
Comment from kahpot
Still can't get over how you can tell a story, have it make sense, and keep such wonderful flow using alliteration like this, you are so very clever, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Still can't get over how you can tell a story, have it make sense, and keep such wonderful flow using alliteration like this, you are so very clever, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to my standby, humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You are so good at these, Karen. The best thing about it is that it's not forced, the poem makes complete sense. The picture is hilarious! Very well done, my friend. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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You are so good at these, Karen. The best thing about it is that it's not forced, the poem makes complete sense. The picture is hilarious! Very well done, my friend. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to me standby. humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)
Comment from lyenochka
That cartoon is horrifyingly humorous! I think I'd be shouting "Spider in the shower" too, if it's not one I can get rid of with just shampoo!
Great job with H-alliteration story poem!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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That cartoon is horrifyingly humorous! I think I'd be shouting "Spider in the shower" too, if it's not one I can get rid of with just shampoo!
Great job with H-alliteration story poem!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to me standby. humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)
Comment from karenina
You must have the long searched for alliteration gene. Nobody does it better...
Best yet, your offerings are never a senseless string of words beginning with the same letter.
Nope.
You offer poems or stories with substantive themes and (magically?)
find an eloquent way of weaving it seamlessly together.
Holy Hopping Hippos!
Impressive!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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You must have the long searched for alliteration gene. Nobody does it better...
Best yet, your offerings are never a senseless string of words beginning with the same letter.
Nope.
You offer poems or stories with substantive themes and (magically?)
find an eloquent way of weaving it seamlessly together.
Holy Hopping Hippos!
Impressive!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I could have used that! I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to my standby, humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)
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This was great!
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I am a wordsmith. I know because I said so. :-)
Comment from F. William Lester
Today's program, children, is brought to you by the letter "H". :-) I love the picture. Reminds of something out of the Far Side or Mad Magazine. Great poem. I don't think I know that many words that begin with "H". You did an outstanding job putting this together. Nice work. Hope you had a fine Thanksgiving. Frank
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Today's program, children, is brought to you by the letter "H". :-) I love the picture. Reminds of something out of the Far Side or Mad Magazine. Great poem. I don't think I know that many words that begin with "H". You did an outstanding job putting this together. Nice work. Hope you had a fine Thanksgiving. Frank
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I love Mad and Far Side. I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to my standby, humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)
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You're welcome. Well done. A warm holiday season to you as well. Frank
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Get under an electric blanket. Or in front of a fire with a fuzzy blanket. Watch a black and white movie like "Shadow of a Doubt" 1943. A Hitchcock Masterpiece. Karen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Cute cartoon. It is not such a cute situation for Howard. His insensitive relatives have been very obnoxious in his hometown. Now he fears everyone is against him.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Cute cartoon. It is not such a cute situation for Howard. His insensitive relatives have been very obnoxious in his hometown. Now he fears everyone is against him.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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I usually try to use only words starting with the same letter. But, trying that the other day made it clumsy.
It flowed much better with the occasional alien word.
Thanks for the read. And I try to find pictures that effortlessly blend, but nothing exactly fit. So, I went to my standby, humor. Happy Holidays. Karen :-)