Barefoot In The Rain
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Comment from Tim Margetts
LMFAO Carol, my dear friend.
OK question posed just a few minutes ago now duly answered.
I am no longer confused thanks to your author notes.
Question.
I'm a bloke so its one I can't really answer.
Do women really think/act like this?
Anyway, I shall continue on despite not being my usual fair.
Tim x
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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LMFAO Carol, my dear friend.
OK question posed just a few minutes ago now duly answered.
I am no longer confused thanks to your author notes.
Question.
I'm a bloke so its one I can't really answer.
Do women really think/act like this?
Anyway, I shall continue on despite not being my usual fair.
Tim x
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Some women I guess... I've never been star-struck.... It was more like a Mack truck ran over me and my prince charming was there. LOL I shall do my best not to bore you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I remember that flash. I'm glad you picked up the story. I don't know where it is going, but it doesn't sound like something Eleanor or Garth would get involved in. lol
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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I remember that flash. I'm glad you picked up the story. I don't know where it is going, but it doesn't sound like something Eleanor or Garth would get involved in. lol
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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No Eleanor or Garth in this one. It's just a short one to take a break from the gang before we go chasing criminals again. Thanks for the review and thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm glad you have continued this one, it's going to be a sweet Christmas present romance, I can see it already. Unless he's married and the reason he wasn't there was because he had to rush his wife to the maternity hospital because she is in labour.....
Ahem, sorry about that!!! Lol. I love it already. Well done again, my friend. Hey you came in second! I'm sure you would have had another vote had it been open longer. Love and hugs my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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I'm glad you have continued this one, it's going to be a sweet Christmas present romance, I can see it already. Unless he's married and the reason he wasn't there was because he had to rush his wife to the maternity hospital because she is in labour.....
Ahem, sorry about that!!! Lol. I love it already. Well done again, my friend. Hey you came in second! I'm sure you would have had another vote had it been open longer. Love and hugs my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you, my dear. Just thought I should toss in a little nice and easy novelette ...a very short one...before we go chasing criminals again. Though Eleanor is already tapping my brain and telling me to get busy. LOL I'm thrilled you won (and I told you so). Taking second place to you is quite alright. Smiles, hugs and love...Carol
Just posted another short too!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting beginning that promises to be another of your terrific books. The mystery is there, now for the surprise discovery of something. What will it be? Mystery? Murder?
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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This is an interesting beginning that promises to be another of your terrific books. The mystery is there, now for the surprise discovery of something. What will it be? Mystery? Murder?
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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HI, Carol...This is just a short one...so everyone could have a break for a few days from chasing criminals and seeing ghosts. Though Eleanor is tapping my shoulder and saying let's go.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
A good chapter. We've learned much about Kendra's personality in these little dialogues with different people. You've done a good job with Kendra's emotions that have changed significantly in this chapter. Hugs! Carol
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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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A good chapter. We've learned much about Kendra's personality in these little dialogues with different people. You've done a good job with Kendra's emotions that have changed significantly in this chapter. Hugs! Carol
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Strange what "love" can do to a person.... But it can be fun, of course. It's only going to be a short one, but I hope that you enjoy it.
Smiles, Carol
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I didn't realize this was going to be another book. Looking forward to reading it, of course. Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Sounds like a good story beginning - but I fear I missed chapter 1. It was engaging and I look forward to seeing how anbd when she will meet him again.
Edits: her heel caught in a crack, snapping off with a sharp. (extra word needed at the end)
Audry, (Audrey) (three times)
Wendy
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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Sounds like a good story beginning - but I fear I missed chapter 1. It was engaging and I look forward to seeing how anbd when she will meet him again.
Edits: her heel caught in a crack, snapping off with a sharp. (extra word needed at the end)
Audry, (Audrey) (three times)
Wendy
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Sorry...I'll fix it immediately. I've had to post and repost so many times today with nothing happening that I'm messing up everything. Thanks so much for the help Wendy.
Smiles, Carol
PS..Now instead of Chapter two being posted for 98 cents...chapter one is. And Chapter two has nothing. I think I've gone crazy or Tom has.
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Oh that's so very frustrating for you!
Wendy
Comment from Ric Myworld
So, is that how it works? Women like Silly Putty to the first blue-eyed handsome man that smiles at her? That little unexplainable tickle in her tummy? I've often wondered what "love at first sight" looked or felt like. But I guess, I'll never know, I don't have blue eyes. Thanks for another fun read!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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So, is that how it works? Women like Silly Putty to the first blue-eyed handsome man that smiles at her? That little unexplainable tickle in her tummy? I've often wondered what "love at first sight" looked or felt like. But I guess, I'll never know, I don't have blue eyes. Thanks for another fun read!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Love is one of those little secrets that wears a different disguise for every person it strikes...it likes to keep you guessing until that very moment when Bam! you know you've been struck and struck hard..... I'm sure your boyish charm has done that to a lady or two.
Thanks for enjoying the chapter. I appreciate YOU, the time and the review...not to mention those lovely stars. You put a twinkle in my eye, LOL
Have a wonderful evening.
Smiles, Carol