Barefoot In The Rain
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Comment from Carol Clark2
Yes, there must be a reason why Kendra is still hoping about a man she doesn't know yet. No spark with the accountant, and she doesn't seem to be attracted to the author either. I'm wondering where Rachel is. Good chapter!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Yes, there must be a reason why Kendra is still hoping about a man she doesn't know yet. No spark with the accountant, and she doesn't seem to be attracted to the author either. I'm wondering where Rachel is. Good chapter!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Kendra's closed herself off from men for a while because of a bad relationship. I think when the spark hit, it short circuited right through her heart and now she's freaking. Sounds good, right?
Smiles, Carol
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Sounds right. Hopefully she'll open her eyes, or perhaps she'll meet the stranger again soon.
Comment from BethShelby
She did have a strong reaction seeing some she didn't really know with another woman. She developed a lot hopes for something she in her mind that she thought might happen. Who knows there may be a reason for her to feel a closeness with no assurance.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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She did have a strong reaction seeing some she didn't really know with another woman. She developed a lot hopes for something she in her mind that she thought might happen. Who knows there may be a reason for her to feel a closeness with no assurance.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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I thin she got struck with that once-in-a-lifetime blow and she hasn't been able to get her feet on the ground or her head out the clouds ever since. I don't know...I just write the stuff. LOl
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, sometimes there are certain little things that can make your picking and choosing a little easier, and when you find out someone is an accountant, you immediately know they are boring. LOL. And don't worry about who or what the woman with the man you're attracted to is. You can always push her in front of a bus or train. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Well, sometimes there are certain little things that can make your picking and choosing a little easier, and when you find out someone is an accountant, you immediately know they are boring. LOL. And don't worry about who or what the woman with the man you're attracted to is. You can always push her in front of a bus or train. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Push her in front of a bus or train.... Remind me to look both ways if I ever have the opportunity to share a walk with you. LOL Maybe I shoul incorporate your thoughts into my story because I'm not too promising on the romance writing... and your thriller sounds better.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm wondering if it was his sister. Could be?? Now we know why he wasn't on the train. I can't wait to read more. I'm wondering if Rachel not being home is significant???
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I'm wondering if it was his sister. Could be?? Now we know why he wasn't on the train. I can't wait to read more. I'm wondering if Rachel not being home is significant???
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thanks for reading another chapter, Barbara. It's not going to be a long story, mainly because I don't think I'm suited to writing romances.... I love the thought of love, but I don't put it into words very well. Ric told me to get rid of the other woman by pushing her in front of a bus or a train... sounds like the story could turn into a thriller. LOL
Smiles, Carol
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Ric had a good idea, but I don't do violence.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Of course, she's his sister!! Or his mother who has had loads of expensive cosmetic surgery!! Lol. Things are never what they seem, so she must keep on hoping, but, at the same time, she must concentrate on her work as well!! This is getting good, Carol. Very well done. Love and hugs Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Of course, she's his sister!! Or his mother who has had loads of expensive cosmetic surgery!! Lol. Things are never what they seem, so she must keep on hoping, but, at the same time, she must concentrate on her work as well!! This is getting good, Carol. Very well done. Love and hugs Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Oh...we could have a cometic convention and change everyone's appearance or we could follow Ric's suggestion and push the woman in front of a bus or train... then we'd have a thriller. Writing romance doesn't suit me and I miss Eleanor and the gang. This won't be a long story and I'll wade through it. Thanks for reading and for putting up with my crazy thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
PS I am so far behind on review but I am struggling again to get there. Hope you are well and enjoying the season. Love ya, Carol