Barefoot In The Rain
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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is a wonderful chapter to your novella. It sees Ms. Kendra has a conundrum on her hands. What ever is she going to do. If I was a betting woman, (which I am) Ethen is going to follow her out to the patio. Keep writing sister I need to know what happens next.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
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Carol,
This is a wonderful chapter to your novella. It sees Ms. Kendra has a conundrum on her hands. What ever is she going to do. If I was a betting woman, (which I am) Ethen is going to follow her out to the patio. Keep writing sister I need to know what happens next.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh dear. Now what? She has James, who clearly is smitten with her, and Ethan, who she has been searching for and is obviously looking for her. I hope you have a nice ending, Carol! This is a hum-dinger of a story. Can't wait for the next part. Did you get my pm message? Loving this story. :)) Sandra xxx
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Oh dear. Now what? She has James, who clearly is smitten with her, and Ethan, who she has been searching for and is obviously looking for her. I hope you have a nice ending, Carol! This is a hum-dinger of a story. Can't wait for the next part. Did you get my pm message? Loving this story. :)) Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Yes, I did...thank you! I've been trying to get this story wrapped up (2 more chapters (long ones) I think...and a Christmas story.... plus getting ready to pack and take off to NC. Glad you are enjoying this short one. Thanks so much as always.
Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
Comment from Lana Marie
I really enjoyed this chapter. You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time wondering what was going to happen with Kendra and Ethan if they were able to see each other again. It's like one of those lifetime/Hallmark movies. Reading this and watching a show are two different things. You did a great job , depicting her feelings and emotions and the anticipation that Kendra was experiencing. It's a dilemma that so many people go through in their lifetime as far as having feelings for more than one person. I hope I get a chance to read the next chapter. Great job.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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I really enjoyed this chapter. You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time wondering what was going to happen with Kendra and Ethan if they were able to see each other again. It's like one of those lifetime/Hallmark movies. Reading this and watching a show are two different things. You did a great job , depicting her feelings and emotions and the anticipation that Kendra was experiencing. It's a dilemma that so many people go through in their lifetime as far as having feelings for more than one person. I hope I get a chance to read the next chapter. Great job.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much Lana. How awesome to receive a six and your kind words. This is a short novelette to finish out the year and there are only two chapters (I think) to go. Hope you continue to read and enjoy the ending. Thank you so much for your kindness.
miles, Carol