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Merry Christmas?

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Douglas
Holiday spirits keep you happy without the alcohol that accompanies holiday parties. Some families, sadly, need the drinks to be able to handle the time together without a fight. This is the family who should learn what holiday spirit really means.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page it you are interested. If this is a repeat, I am sorry.


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    Congratulations on the book, Joan! Are some of your stories from here in it?
    Douglas
reply by dragonpoet on 02-Jan-2025
    Thanks fot the congrats for my book,Douglas. Yes everything in the the book is in my portfolio. I just thought publishing them in full would make them easier to free.
    Joan
Comment from Charles D Ezell
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Good one poet. much meaning in a few words said. Perfect photo compliments the wording. I find no fault. Thanks for sharing your talent.Happy New Year.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much! I was fortunate to find the photos!
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Douglas, yes, being homeless can be no fun. I just read yesterday that homelessness has reached a record high of way over 700000 in the US. It's a staggering number. Small measures as in your area goes some way , but it won't cure the problem. Good Luck in the contest. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    The problem has plagued humanity since the beginning.

    What is concerning is the lack of concern in the modern era.

    Awesome to hear from you!
Comment from Darlene BoClair
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I like your mission.
I like how your poetry contest entry informs so many on why and how we each can help the homeless in our community.
Happy New Year!







 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
    Thanks, Darlene. Happy New Year!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
    Thanks, Darlene. Happy New Year!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Douglas,

This is a great 5-7-5 poem. I am so glad your community is helping the homeless out. It is sad to see them this time of year or blazing hot summers, because they find no relief. We should all pray that Jesus will use the Holy Spirit to fill more people with the heart for the homeless.

Well done

Cecilia

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    Very true, Cecilia. All hands on deck!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    Very true, Cecilia. All hands on deck!
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 05-Jan-2025
    Are you a shipmate?
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    The US Navy was my private Uber. Ha! I was a marine.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    Still am really. We never let it go. LOL!
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 05-Jan-2025
    Ahoy, mate. It's true it stays with you forever.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 05-Jan-2025
    Oh no. Do I need to get you a box of crayons?
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    Why? Is it time for dinner?
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 05-Jan-2025
    Funny stuff
Comment from Kayte Ray
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wow
So few words to paint such a powerful picture.
This is a well written poem.
I really like the solidity of your presentation here.
Your graphic is also a wonderful fit.
Well done,
You gave me chills.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
    Just a gentle (or not) reminder that there many in need this season.
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Like this 5-7-5 entry. Colorful image and absolutely love your New Year resolution suggestion. Helping the homeless is a wonderful Resolution and I do like your suggestions. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Barry!
Comment from royowen
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I've often wondered about the homeless how they fared, we were in St Petersburg in Russia and the homeless slept in building entrances, I wondered how the survived in the winter, well done Douglas, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
    Happy New Year, Roy!
reply by royowen on 31-Dec-2024
    You too Douglas
Comment from Sanku
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Living in India with 1400 million people of which half of them are unfortunate I can relate to this message .We have about 100 million rich people and about 400 million middle class So the gap between rich and poor are increasing. Charities are simply not enough .. we try to do whatever we can .
A very good message.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
    Thank you. The problem is growing at an incredible rate.
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent, yes, we all need some holiday spirit to the unfortunate ones, we have quite a few here where I work, though the weather is not so bad or cold, it is still wrong that they are in this situation, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
    Thanks! Nice to hear from you.