Veil of Secrets
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Comment from karenina
That's some kind of message, cufflinks and all! Are you sure you never dubbed elbows with the MAFIA? You
nail these characters like their family!
+Just kidding+
What a mess! I'm not even going to try to guess who is,at the bottom of the jail break...
You're always ten steps ahead of me!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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That's some kind of message, cufflinks and all! Are you sure you never dubbed elbows with the MAFIA? You
nail these characters like their family!
+Just kidding+
What a mess! I'm not even going to try to guess who is,at the bottom of the jail break...
You're always ten steps ahead of me!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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I don't think I should admit to anything. Though my house was the center point of many parties where it was best to remain in my kitchen then in the dining room.... to be seen but not heard.
Thanks so much for the review and glad I have you guessing. I've got to get back into the writing mode now that I am home. My bubble kind of popped....
Smiles, Carol
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Glad you are home safely. I trust Johnny made it through your absence?
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Gained another 30 pounds by eating all the butter, honey, frosting and anything else he could find in the house...but he's fine. Now I can start scrubbing the place,,, Such is life. Thanks for asking.
Comment from Teri7
Carol, This is another great chapter you have penned. You are very good at writing this type of story. Very interesting and I can't wait until the next one! love and blessings, teri
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Carol, This is another great chapter you have penned. You are very good at writing this type of story. Very interesting and I can't wait until the next one! love and blessings, teri
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thanks so much Teri for the kind review and thoughts on my story. Appreciate you all the time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This was a great second chapter. You're right about having several plots to it. You have Miriam missing and now the mob is getting involved.
Great job my friend.
Love ya,
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Carol,
This was a great second chapter. You're right about having several plots to it. You have Miriam missing and now the mob is getting involved.
Great job my friend.
Love ya,
Cecilia
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thanks, sister.... I'm struggling to get back into the mode of writing but maybe today will be the day...or tomorrow.... Hope all is well with you.
Smiles, Carol
