Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

lol I can picture this brigade. They can be noisy and pushy. But if food is involved, it's natural. Nice follow up on the renga thread. Well done. Keep contributing.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You created a magical scene here with just a few words, I enjoyed your imaginative poem Lisa, a fine presentation, these are magnificent animals, love Dolly x x x x

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I can't stop writing them.

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

Oh wow! that seems like a lot of fun to string together all these stanzas from different writers, abilities, and creativity.
I learn so much on this site. And this is another one.
I enjoy your imagery and the words that you chose to write along with it.

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. Please add one yourself. This is how I started writing poems in 2020 when I first joined Fanstory.