2025 Favorite Poems
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Comment from RJ Heritage
The words are beautiful and are heavenly inclined which speaks of the love that is mutual between these two.Thanks for sharing you for sharing.
Good luck in the contest.
RJ
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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The words are beautiful and are heavenly inclined which speaks of the love that is mutual between these two.Thanks for sharing you for sharing.
Good luck in the contest.
RJ
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an extremely sensitive and emotionally strong poem. It flows well and shares feelings of love and longing only known between true loves. I wish this poem represents your life because you deserve this.
Best wishes,
Alexan
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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This is an extremely sensitive and emotionally strong poem. It flows well and shares feelings of love and longing only known between true loves. I wish this poem represents your life because you deserve this.
Best wishes,
Alexan
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome!
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautifully expressed verse about this dream man with earthy manliness tender romance and love oozing from his lovely soul. My favourite stanza starts with "He smells like barley fields... " Well done and good luck! Debbie
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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A beautifully expressed verse about this dream man with earthy manliness tender romance and love oozing from his lovely soul. My favourite stanza starts with "He smells like barley fields... " Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is beautiful. It feels so full of love! The whole poem flows with such warmth. Making it impossible not to feel the deep connection between you and your Man. Loved every word of it!
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Your poem is beautiful. It feels so full of love! The whole poem flows with such warmth. Making it impossible not to feel the deep connection between you and your Man. Loved every word of it!
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
I'm grateful for your excellent stars review and kind words 😊
Comment from jacquelyn popp
This poem is absolutely beautiful and so well written, capturing the essence of deep love, admiration, and devotion with breathtaking imagery. Every line is infused with passion, painting a vivid picture of a man both strong and tender, rugged yet full of warmth.
The poet's descriptions are mesmerizing-from his midnight blue eyes filled with glistening stars to the way his hands, rough from work, are as gentle as butterfly kisses. These contrasts make the love between them feel real, raw, and deeply felt. The nickname Little Storm adds a touch of intimacy and admiration, showing a love that is both respectful and playful.
The sensory details are stunning-the scent of barley fields windswept in the breeze, the sound of vibrant laughter like a vivacious bubbly creek, and the feel of being held in an everlasting love under the moonlight. These elements create an almost dreamlike, Elysian world where love is pure, strong, and eternal.
But beyond its beauty, this poem is also a celebration of connection-the kind of love that stirs the soul, fills the heart, and offers a place of safety and belonging. The final lines, I am His woman and He is my Man, seal the poem with a powerful sense of commitment and unity.
This is more than a love poem-it's a tribute to a bond that is both earthly and ethereal, passionate and peaceful, fierce and tender. A truly moving and unforgettable piece!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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This poem is absolutely beautiful and so well written, capturing the essence of deep love, admiration, and devotion with breathtaking imagery. Every line is infused with passion, painting a vivid picture of a man both strong and tender, rugged yet full of warmth.
The poet's descriptions are mesmerizing-from his midnight blue eyes filled with glistening stars to the way his hands, rough from work, are as gentle as butterfly kisses. These contrasts make the love between them feel real, raw, and deeply felt. The nickname Little Storm adds a touch of intimacy and admiration, showing a love that is both respectful and playful.
The sensory details are stunning-the scent of barley fields windswept in the breeze, the sound of vibrant laughter like a vivacious bubbly creek, and the feel of being held in an everlasting love under the moonlight. These elements create an almost dreamlike, Elysian world where love is pure, strong, and eternal.
But beyond its beauty, this poem is also a celebration of connection-the kind of love that stirs the soul, fills the heart, and offers a place of safety and belonging. The final lines, I am His woman and He is my Man, seal the poem with a powerful sense of commitment and unity.
This is more than a love poem-it's a tribute to a bond that is both earthly and ethereal, passionate and peaceful, fierce and tender. A truly moving and unforgettable piece!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Wow, I never had such a detailed and thoughtful review. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I am happy you like it. Ms. Jacquelyn Popp, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
