Leftovers....
Being silly for a change....15 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
I didn't go into punctuation. This was just too cute. If that really happened it would be one happy man I am sure. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2008
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I didn't go into punctuation. This was just too cute. If that really happened it would be one happy man I am sure. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 14-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2008
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LOL....
Just wishful thinking on my part:-) No wife or girlfriend just my imagination:-) Glad I could bring a smile.... Buddy
Comment from RossJM
Listen, Dreamdancer, if you want to know my opinion, I wouldn't post anything of this kind. Honestly.
But then again I realize of course that we hear stories like this every day and that means someone has to come up with them. Right?
You are probably one of the authors of those stories.
And yes, you need to take care of your punctuation:
Honey[,] I say[.]
... replied[.]
Regards,
Ross
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2008
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Listen, Dreamdancer, if you want to know my opinion, I wouldn't post anything of this kind. Honestly.
But then again I realize of course that we hear stories like this every day and that means someone has to come up with them. Right?
You are probably one of the authors of those stories.
And yes, you need to take care of your punctuation:
Honey[,] I say[.]
... replied[.]
Regards,
Ross
P.S. Please let me know if you want me to refrain from reviewing your work.
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2008
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Hi Ross,
Sir, believe it or not this is a first for me and no I don't normaly post stories like this. I am honored by your honest and heart felt review and as for not having you review something I write well that is out of the question. I understand that not all people will like something I write and I prefer honesty over the stroking of my ego. It seems that I would get that honesty from you. I did not mean to demean-- disrespect or hurt any ones feelings. I am sorry that you found this offensive. Your comments and suggestions mean a lot to me and I thank you so very much for the honesty.... Dancing in Dreams
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I'm glad we are on the same page.
Ross
Comment from Wendyanne
Well Buddy, what can I say? I am absolutely disgusted with this very funny piece of flash fiction lol. It's nice to see your funny side as well as your serious side
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2008
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Well Buddy, what can I say? I am absolutely disgusted with this very funny piece of flash fiction lol. It's nice to see your funny side as well as your serious side
Comment Written 14-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2008
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LOL....
I am always to serious for my own good and sometimes can really depress myself:-) Thank you for sharing a laugh with me for a change.... Buddy
Comment from rco2
Well, I could definately picture what was going on. Her response made me chuckle a bit. Even though you may not be comfortable with proper punctuation I think you could stretch these 5 lines into a real short story. Why not?
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2008
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Well, I could definately picture what was going on. Her response made me chuckle a bit. Even though you may not be comfortable with proper punctuation I think you could stretch these 5 lines into a real short story. Why not?
Comment Written 14-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2008
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LOL...
My lack of knowledge on the proper way to write is my biggest set back. I am at times embarrassed by my ingnorence. I hope that I shared a laugh and thank you for your kind comments my friend and they are always most welcome here.... Dancing in Dreams
Comment from Susan E. Pennycuff
dang and who couldn't just love a man who loves fast food... that wife of yours must just love cookin for you, and fast easy clean up as well... what a pleasure meal time must be at your house... lmbo
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2008
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dang and who couldn't just love a man who loves fast food... that wife of yours must just love cookin for you, and fast easy clean up as well... what a pleasure meal time must be at your house... lmbo
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2008
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LOL....
I have been so serious of late that I thought I would try to make someone laugh for a change:-) Now if I had a wife or girlfriend.... Dancing in Dreams
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well am sure after this write you will have tons of offers
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That's why I am always Dancing in Dreams for they are more the reality for me:-)
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I don't believe that for one second, I have seen your picture... you are not hurting for a date if you wanted one... lol You ain't fooling me dear.
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Big smile,
I can find them just not keep them. My job scares most of them off and the level of dedication to the job scares away the rest... So now I maintain only friends.... Your comments made me smile:-)