Comment from Falafa

Excellent

Oh, this is a thrilling chapter. I've come into it late, but in itself, there is tremendous suspense in it. I like the way you've divided the "scenes" into the capturers and the searchers. Really neat. Thanks for the opportunity..........

 Comment Written 17-May-2008

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reply by the author on 18-May-2008

Hi Falafa,

Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I really appreciate your comments and hope to see you again soon,

Gayle

Comment from Jonez08

Exceptional

excellent story, well written and the details are incredible.The characters are strong. I like that you've given the reader the victims side and the police. Awesome, I can't wait to read more. You deserve a 6 and here it is.

Cassandra

 Comment Written 17-May-2008

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reply by the author on 17-May-2008

Well, Cassandra, I'm truly flattered. Thank you very much for the wonderful comments. I'm glad you liked this one and hope I can continue to please.

Thanks for the lovely sixer!

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

Holy Cow! What a story you are spinnin' up here, girl. This yarn look to me like it's darn near perfect. I didn't see a thing that I'd change.

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 Comment Written 17-May-2008

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reply by the author on 17-May-2008

Hey Freddie,

Sheesh, I'm giving myself the creeps. I'm glad you liked this one. Another on the way shortly. Any word from Angela yet regarding the books?

Have a great weekend, talk soon,

Hugs,
Annabelle

reply by Norbanus on 17-May-2008

You really are getting better and better at this stuff, Annabelle. This is just super.

Angela wants to take a look at the books but she is swamped for the next couple of weeks, finishing up mine and getting Port in the Storm ready. Do you have updated MS?

reply by the author on 17-May-2008

Yes, I do, in every form known to man! LOL! No rush, whenever you're ready. :-)