Comment from Johnny Carwash

Excellent

Another excellent read. This story just gets better and better. And, no, I don't think this was too long. It was detailed and VERY enjoyable.

 Comment Written 19-May-2008

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reply by the author on 20-May-2008

Hey Johnny,

My goodness, your comments make me smile. Thanks so much for the R&R and hope to see you again.

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from AbigailDavid

Excellent

Hello, I enjoyed this well written story ... even with the gaps I have in character development and plot, it read with a smooth flow thanks to good grammar and spelling. Lots of great descriptive writing that engages the reader.

No suggestions for improvement. A story I would recommend, Abby

 Comment Written 19-May-2008

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reply by the author on 19-May-2008

Hi Abby,

Thank yo so much for the fine R&R and your comments.

I appreciate your support,

Gayle

Comment from bluetwo

Excellent

She had started to come to terms with the changes when she and Terry decided they wanted to be an important part of Sessions & Browning, Private Investigators. They sealed the deal when they helped Lenny and Jim bring down a terrorist plot. The two million dollar reward they collected was icing on the cake. - This paragraph conveys a lot of information that probably needs more explanation than you give it.

 Comment Written 19-May-2008

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reply by the author on 19-May-2008

Hey Blue,

Let me check back there. Them being PI's and joining the guys has been alluded to in earlier chapters. Now, that "two million reward" that happened in the previous book and I'm not sure I should use it. Especially since it came to your attention. I don't want to go into previous books, even though this is a series.

Thanks a bunch!

Gayle

Comment from Korton

Excellent

Excellent chapter, although I was a bit confused for a while, apparently, Cricket is a new canine that I'm not familiar with. Has this dog been introduced earlier? Very well done.

 Comment Written 19-May-2008

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reply by the author on 19-May-2008

Hey Frank,

Yes, this is the long-awaited Cricket. She was alluded to briefly in Vantage Point, and in earlier chapters of this book, but now she'll actually join in the fun.

Thanks so much for the great R&R!

Grins,
Gayle

Comment from jsturgeon

Excellent

I enjoyed the chapter. You did a great job on describing the settings and also the character (clown). I will look back at the begining of the story and make my comments accordingly.

If you don't mind, I do an overall review at the end of the book. At that point I break down my review into several sections. First is the "plot", second is the "dialogue", third is the "settings" and last is the "description".

I will give you honest notes throughout each chapter and comment on any errors (if there are any).

Overall, great job. Jeff Sturgeon

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 Comment Written 19-May-2008

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reply by the author on 19-May-2008

Hey Jeff,

Wow, I'd love a review like that and I hope you do go back to the beginning. This is the third in a series and I'm curious to hear how this one sounds to you as we go along.

I'm sure lucky to have met you,

Gayle