Connector of Dots
Be careful how you connect the dots29 total reviews
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
ok ok ok ok ok~! I am roaring! What a wonderful composition! This should most certainly win the contest-- hands down! Yeah, I think I was once married to this guy. Great work and a super read. Smiles, Seraph ~
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
ok ok ok ok ok~! I am roaring! What a wonderful composition! This should most certainly win the contest-- hands down! Yeah, I think I was once married to this guy. Great work and a super read. Smiles, Seraph ~
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
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when there is no trust, there is nothing in a relationship. thanks, Seraph. love, jan
Comment from earthlybeing
Oh it sounds like you have covered all the bases with this one. Well written and very easy to read and understand. Very enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Thanks, Jeanette
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
Oh it sounds like you have covered all the bases with this one. Well written and very easy to read and understand. Very enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
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thanks, Jeanette. love, jan
Comment from Beans
I loved this entry. At first I thought it was a real comment like in the papers, when I realized it wasn't I laughed out loud. It is witty and smart and I love that you call it connector of dots. I don't see any revisions needed. The only thing I think you should do is write more!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
I loved this entry. At first I thought it was a real comment like in the papers, when I realized it wasn't I laughed out loud. It is witty and smart and I love that you call it connector of dots. I don't see any revisions needed. The only thing I think you should do is write more!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
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thanks, elphaba, for the great review and encouragement. love, jan
Comment from laurelp
Your letter was very funny. Also, that bed is very crowded. I don't know "how you found out" about dear old Mom sharing the bed. But your response to him was very good. Not sure the papers would hire you but it did make for a great laugh.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
Your letter was very funny. Also, that bed is very crowded. I don't know "how you found out" about dear old Mom sharing the bed. But your response to him was very good. Not sure the papers would hire you but it did make for a great laugh.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
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no, but Jerry Springer called. LOL! love, jan
Comment from Gypsymooncat
Excellent!! Too funny! Written beautifully, I enjoyed connecting every dot. Very unique take on this prompt too I thought - one bedroom apartments! Who woulda thunk it?? Best of luck to you! xoxoxoxoxxo
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
Excellent!! Too funny! Written beautifully, I enjoyed connecting every dot. Very unique take on this prompt too I thought - one bedroom apartments! Who woulda thunk it?? Best of luck to you! xoxoxoxoxxo
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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had to have some excuse to put them all in the same bed with the Poodle, right? thanks for the review. love, jan
Comment from skye
Interesting response to the letter... strongly worded, with caustic humor and great ideas.
I like the sharp, succinct retort... the common sense attitude.
Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
Interesting response to the letter... strongly worded, with caustic humor and great ideas.
I like the sharp, succinct retort... the common sense attitude.
Well done.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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thanks, skye. love, jan
Comment from ulster3
Hello Rdfrdmom.
I love the play on the words spectacle and spectacles. You sure connected the dots in a very humorous way. Luck in the contest. Fondly, rebecca
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
Hello Rdfrdmom.
I love the play on the words spectacle and spectacles. You sure connected the dots in a very humorous way. Luck in the contest. Fondly, rebecca
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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thanks, rebecca, that was my intent. love, jan
Comment from Brian S. Pratt
Better than some of the Dear Abby's I've read the past day. good job. thought it was interesting with a touch of humor.
Well done.
Brian S. Pratt
Fantasy Author
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
Better than some of the Dear Abby's I've read the past day. good job. thought it was interesting with a touch of humor.
Well done.
Brian S. Pratt
Fantasy Author
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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thanks, Brian. love, jan
Comment from chaswriter
Jan - That was a fun, imaginative write. And a thorough one at that. "The steamroller in bed" visual was particularly funny. I enjoyed it. Charlie
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
Jan - That was a fun, imaginative write. And a thorough one at that. "The steamroller in bed" visual was particularly funny. I enjoyed it. Charlie
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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glad you enjoyed it, Charlie. thanks. love, jan
Comment from benjan
Very cute, Rdfrdmom2. You have indeed connected the dots. The fact that the columnist took the time to scope out the address added to the voice of the piece. The reference to Easy Spirits made me laugh, as well as the spectacle comment. nice job. Good luck in the contest. benjan ;o)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
Very cute, Rdfrdmom2. You have indeed connected the dots. The fact that the columnist took the time to scope out the address added to the voice of the piece. The reference to Easy Spirits made me laugh, as well as the spectacle comment. nice job. Good luck in the contest. benjan ;o)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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benjan, I wear Easy Spirits so couldn't resist. thanks. love, jan