Comment from Mountainstar2

Excellent

Beautiful poem written from the heart, can only be more perfect when written and shared by that love...

A poem with lovely content of beauty and written style that is unique. A perfect picture to share in the mood of the poem. Perfect as written. A great tribute to the lady of the poet's choice. Lovely indeed!

Thanks for sharing...MOuntainstar2..

 Comment Written 08-May-2010

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reply by the author on 08-May-2010

thank you for yor warm comments

reply by Mountainstar2 on 09-May-2010

You are very welcome...MS2..

Comment from DecrepitOldBag

Excellent

This really is beautifully tasteful and romantic. I nreally cannot find any fault in it at all. In nfact, it set me to thinking back to special times myself. You have a rare gift for such powerful imagery.

Warm wishes
Kat

 Comment Written 08-May-2010

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reply by the author on 08-May-2010

thank you kat

Comment from percival86jack

Excellent

This is a beautiful and passionate look at what it once was and now seems left only to treasured memories. Nicely written filled with deep emotion... cheers, Jack

 Comment Written 08-May-2010

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reply by the author on 08-May-2010

thanks again my friend

Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

I think this wonderfully written poem about enjoying what you've got while it lasts was so beautifully presented and especially coming from a man's POV I found it particularly lovely.
Well written and thoughtfully crafted and a pleasure to read as all your writes are.
Cheers closetpoet xo

 Comment Written 08-May-2010

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reply by the author on 08-May-2010

thanks jester

Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn

Excellent

This is a lovely, expressive and descriptive love poem. I particularly like the line 'we live our lives so guarded to the things you must put right..' Very true!

 Comment Written 08-May-2010

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reply by the author on 08-May-2010

thanks again janine

Comment from Nicki_Mist

Excellent

WOW!
Father Time was forgiving as we floated out to space,
Memories from that moment, lay so perfect in this place
You are go good at these love poems. I was really into reading this one that held me from start to finish. Beautiful!
Nicole

 Comment Written 08-May-2010

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reply by the author on 08-May-2010

thanks again nicole

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

'Fleeting Memories' is a delightfully written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet has rightly observed that we should enjoy the moment as it will not last for long. It was a pleasure to read and review a work of this caliber.

 Comment Written 08-May-2010

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reply by the author on 08-May-2010

thank you my friend

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 09-May-2010

You're welcome.
Kind regards, the Duchess

Comment from Fish

Excellent

There is no point in actually using
punctuation if it's just to suggest
pauses amidst one long breathless
sentence. Or, maybe there is...
but I believe- I have faith- that you
can go beyond pure laziness and
put a period where it belongs.
Right: poetic license = you don't
care about what your readers think
or know.
Many happy starry reviews to you!
:) fish

 Comment Written 07-May-2010

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reply by the author on 08-May-2010

fish thank you for your comments i do need you to help as i do make the changes thanks

Comment from IanC

Excellent

A very well presented poem. The words are well chosen. When read slowly out loud it sounds especially nice. I like the last line the best. "the memories of perfection from wonders of last night".

 Comment Written 07-May-2010

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reply by the author on 08-May-2010

thanks again Ian

Comment from Aletheia

Excellent

Yes, enjoy each moment as it comes. I could not agree more. Focus on the good when the bad comes. That's what I say! Good write! B

 Comment Written 07-May-2010

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reply by the author on 08-May-2010

thanks again B

reply by Aletheia on 08-May-2010

You're welcome