Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "This fellow's on the Square"A book of Poetry & Writing
54 total reviews
Comment from fionageorge
What a simple wish, and what a wonderful way to live you life, that this is how you would like to be remembered. So different from my ambition. I would like everyone who knew me and loved me to have a party to celebrate my life. I would like a fance coffin, lots of flowers, and something funny on my tombstone.
Great poem, flows freely. Warmest regards, Marijke
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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What a simple wish, and what a wonderful way to live you life, that this is how you would like to be remembered. So different from my ambition. I would like everyone who knew me and loved me to have a party to celebrate my life. I would like a fance coffin, lots of flowers, and something funny on my tombstone.
Great poem, flows freely. Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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Thank you Marijke for reading GW
Comment from MikiB
Excellent writing here on this poem. He says to say here sleeps a fellow who was always on the Square. Good poem.
And the picture fits.
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Excellent writing here on this poem. He says to say here sleeps a fellow who was always on the Square. Good poem.
And the picture fits.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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thank you MikiB
Comment from jshep
I really like this poem, deepwater. It has lovely flow and I think an original epitaph 'Here sleeps now a fellow who was always on the square.' Can't ask for more than that. Lovely presentation with the masonic symbol and font. Also like your use of rhyme. Well done. Joyce
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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I really like this poem, deepwater. It has lovely flow and I think an original epitaph 'Here sleeps now a fellow who was always on the square.' Can't ask for more than that. Lovely presentation with the masonic symbol and font. Also like your use of rhyme. Well done. Joyce
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you Joyce
Comment from LavenderRiverWriter
Again, another great job...You are so talented! I love the simplicity yet profoundness of all your poems. Wonderful! Love, lavender
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Again, another great job...You are so talented! I love the simplicity yet profoundness of all your poems. Wonderful! Love, lavender
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you levender
Comment from luisestable
Good beginning and good end this poem has. The diction is simple but not trivial, a thing that some cannot do without falling into a lot of cliches.
I like the casual approach of this piece, but underneath lies some poetic language.
Luis
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Good beginning and good end this poem has. The diction is simple but not trivial, a thing that some cannot do without falling into a lot of cliches.
I like the casual approach of this piece, but underneath lies some poetic language.
Luis
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you Luis
Comment from Ronni
Desiring that one epitaph is quite compelling and
yet, describing your life, simply candid and irrefuteable.
Great presentation here. Very intriguing.
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Desiring that one epitaph is quite compelling and
yet, describing your life, simply candid and irrefuteable.
Great presentation here. Very intriguing.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you Ronni
Comment from fastdigits
An inspiring poem written in free
style, yet glides down the screen
in measured tones of the true worth
of a man, when the bell tolls for
him, and what footsteps he has left
behind.
well done
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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An inspiring poem written in free
style, yet glides down the screen
in measured tones of the true worth
of a man, when the bell tolls for
him, and what footsteps he has left
behind.
well done
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you fastdigits
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I like your death wish , my friend. The way you presented it-the poetic format is also very beautiful. I think it is really cool to tell death you are ready . kudos
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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I like your death wish , my friend. The way you presented it-the poetic format is also very beautiful. I think it is really cool to tell death you are ready . kudos
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you perp
Comment from dportwood
deepwater,
From the tone of your writings, I am not at all surprised to see one headed with the square and compass. As a fellow Mason, I greet you brother.
Duane
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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deepwater,
From the tone of your writings, I am not at all surprised to see one headed with the square and compass. As a fellow Mason, I greet you brother.
Duane
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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same to you Brother Duane, regands Gary
Comment from minopavlic
Excellent, when all is said and done and our time has come to an end.There should only be one thing we should be remembered for. Throughout our lives we were always on the up and up. It also lends to a well balanced life.
no_obstacle
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Excellent, when all is said and done and our time has come to an end.There should only be one thing we should be remembered for. Throughout our lives we were always on the up and up. It also lends to a well balanced life.
no_obstacle
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you no_obstacle
