He was Her Husband
He allowed her to keep her dignity70 total reviews
Comment from fictionwriter
What a wonderful little story. I think your dad was actually giving your mother a reason to keep going, something that once they give up, it's over. Great job.
the next possible labor strike(,) which always seemed to be looming on the horizon.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2010
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What a wonderful little story. I think your dad was actually giving your mother a reason to keep going, something that once they give up, it's over. Great job.
the next possible labor strike(,) which always seemed to be looming on the horizon.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2010
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Thanks for catching that 'nit.' I'll get it corrected right away! ann
Comment from fayesh
I think you have written a inspiring piece on not just your parents, but upon the sanctity of a committed marriage where "in sickness and in health" are not mere vows said at the wedding, but lived. Bravo to your father who remained steadfast in his love for your Mom, not just in words but in actions.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2010
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I think you have written a inspiring piece on not just your parents, but upon the sanctity of a committed marriage where "in sickness and in health" are not mere vows said at the wedding, but lived. Bravo to your father who remained steadfast in his love for your Mom, not just in words but in actions.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2010
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate your time and your words. ann
Comment from EllieKaye
Hi Ann,
What a sweet story about your dad. I LOVE your biographical stories. They are like coming home, even though it is not at all like my remembrances of childhood. It just feels like I lived it with you. That is your gift. You make the reader feel like they belong with the characters. :)
By the way, I have yet to make it to Texas, but one day I will. :)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2010
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Hi Ann,
What a sweet story about your dad. I LOVE your biographical stories. They are like coming home, even though it is not at all like my remembrances of childhood. It just feels like I lived it with you. That is your gift. You make the reader feel like they belong with the characters. :)
By the way, I have yet to make it to Texas, but one day I will. :)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2010
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When you get to Texas --one day-- you had better call me! I so appreciate your continued support. It means a lot to me. ann
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
My heart is warmed by this story of how your Daddy treated your mother normally, not like some sick stranger, while she was so very ill. He sounds like a fine man, and your mother a fine, brave woman. Thank you for sharing this story. Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2010
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My heart is warmed by this story of how your Daddy treated your mother normally, not like some sick stranger, while she was so very ill. He sounds like a fine man, and your mother a fine, brave woman. Thank you for sharing this story. Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 15-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2010
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate your time in doing both. ann
Comment from DrCarter2001
This is an outstanding piece. The tone is very appropriate, as if the child is telling the story, and it flows well from beginning to end. The few digressions are short enough that they don't disrupt the flow or make it confusing. You managed to avoid unnecessary dialogue tags and your descriptions/settings are vivid. I only found one nit: "a-half" -- I don't think this is actually a word and shoudl be "a half a cup". The message is an excellent one and perfect for this contest. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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This is an outstanding piece. The tone is very appropriate, as if the child is telling the story, and it flows well from beginning to end. The few digressions are short enough that they don't disrupt the flow or make it confusing. You managed to avoid unnecessary dialogue tags and your descriptions/settings are vivid. I only found one nit: "a-half" -- I don't think this is actually a word and shoudl be "a half a cup". The message is an excellent one and perfect for this contest. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Of course you are correct about the a half a cup. I'll make that change immediately. Thank you so much for your more than generous review. I truly appreciate your time and your words. ann
Comment from knowledge
I have read this well written story of yours but this was blank so I will do it again. This is a great ode to your grandmother and grandfather. What lovely people and great examples to their children and grandchildren. You should send this post to all of your relations.
You have my well wishes for the contest.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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I have read this well written story of yours but this was blank so I will do it again. This is a great ode to your grandmother and grandfather. What lovely people and great examples to their children and grandchildren. You should send this post to all of your relations.
You have my well wishes for the contest.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Thank you for your very kind and generous review. The part about my relatives made me smile -- I've bored them so much with my writing that their eyes tend to glaze over now when I mention it. lol. I appreciate your good wishes in the contest. There are a ton of great entries. ann
Comment from CKLA
What a truly beautiful story. Your father was a very wise man. I think you should do well in the contest with this entry. Good luck.
Collette
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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What a truly beautiful story. Your father was a very wise man. I think you should do well in the contest with this entry. Good luck.
Collette
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Thanks for reading and for your generous review. I appreciate the good luck wishes. ann
Comment from 1ClosetWriter
Thank you for sharing such a personal and touching story. You did an execelant job of capturing love, tenderness, respect and nourturing in a short piece. You were fortunate to have the luxury of such important lesson in your life!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Thank you for sharing such a personal and touching story. You did an execelant job of capturing love, tenderness, respect and nourturing in a short piece. You were fortunate to have the luxury of such important lesson in your life!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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I am indeed fortunate and I thank my lucky stars everyday. Speaking of "lucky stars" -- thank you from the bottom of my heart for you more than genersous review. I appreciate. ann
Comment from midgev
What a beautiful story, what a great tribute to a fine man. Your writing is very accessible and down to earth. This account of your parents is very moving as both of them were very heroic. Good luck in the contest, you should win it! Thank you for sharing this with us, Bless you, Midge
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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What a beautiful story, what a great tribute to a fine man. Your writing is very accessible and down to earth. This account of your parents is very moving as both of them were very heroic. Good luck in the contest, you should win it! Thank you for sharing this with us, Bless you, Midge
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I especially thank you for the kind words about my parents. I learned a lot watching them. I appreciate the good luck wishes for the contest. There are some great entries. ann
Comment from jwlee211
what a great ending to the this story. A very loving tribute to your parents. They were blessed to have you and I am glad you understand your mother's words.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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what a great ending to the this story. A very loving tribute to your parents. They were blessed to have you and I am glad you understand your mother's words.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
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Thanks somuch for reading my story. I'm so pleased your enjoyed it. It's amazing how many times I've thought of my mom's words. thanks ann
