Spit
Determination - Free Verse28 total reviews
Comment from Veekz
Oh now this one is something else! Literally; it seems to have two meanings ;)
Very sensual to start with and laughed out loud at the end lines as well as your author notes! :)
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Oh now this one is something else! Literally; it seems to have two meanings ;)
Very sensual to start with and laughed out loud at the end lines as well as your author notes! :)
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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LOL, just love bubbles you!!! Awesome review and such a wonderful take on it!!!!
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
gross a little but still fun---i think i have enough spit in my life without trying, thank you! its very puckish and unique. puckish is a very favorite of mine word for many reasons.
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gross a little but still fun---i think i have enough spit in my life without trying, thank you! its very puckish and unique. puckish is a very favorite of mine word for many reasons.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thanks you. Gross? Wetting your finger to stick it inside a bubble. Sigh, I think it's fun, LOL. Puckish? Hmmm I think I loke this puckish word. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from annettebda
Actually no..I know how to blow and make really really big ones that just sort of hang there but I never tried penetrating one...just too girlie I guess! Love this..the fun and the humour ..great write.
Annette
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Actually no..I know how to blow and make really really big ones that just sort of hang there but I never tried penetrating one...just too girlie I guess! Love this..the fun and the humour ..great write.
Annette
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Oh it's fun to see girl!!!! I love bubbles and playing with them outside where they can float so freely is awesome. Thanks so very much for a great take on this one. Who? You? Girlie not?
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Cute and well written little poem. Also very romantic and sensual as are most of your writings. I enjoy your poems and I learn from reading them. Debbie
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Cute and well written little poem. Also very romantic and sensual as are most of your writings. I enjoy your poems and I learn from reading them. Debbie
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thanks so much, Debbie!!! That's a great thing.
Comment from richard7
:-) :-) :-)
Yup, we had a bath at home, nice and deep!
That is almost stimulating in it's detailed moment of forever passion inducing suggestibility.
Well written and big grins here ear to ear for the twist in emotion end.
Your notes are laugh inducing the color fitting the picture suits the title and theme, really cool and fun to read!!
A grin formed on his lips,,,,,big kid!
Laughter is the best medicine!
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:-) :-) :-)
Yup, we had a bath at home, nice and deep!
That is almost stimulating in it's detailed moment of forever passion inducing suggestibility.
Well written and big grins here ear to ear for the twist in emotion end.
Your notes are laugh inducing the color fitting the picture suits the title and theme, really cool and fun to read!!
A grin formed on his lips,,,,,big kid!
Laughter is the best medicine!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Nice to know you laughed, Richard!!! Thanks so very much!!!
Comment from Ghosterb
Hmmmmm I really enjoyed this poem my friend!
I can honestly say yes I have tried it and it is pretty awesome. I definitely didn't think I would be reading about it in a poem....but with you anything is possible ;o)
nicely done my friend!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Hmmmmm I really enjoyed this poem my friend!
I can honestly say yes I have tried it and it is pretty awesome. I definitely didn't think I would be reading about it in a poem....but with you anything is possible ;o)
nicely done my friend!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
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LOL and so much fun for sure. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Thanks Ghost!!!
Comment from JW
Nice picture. Actually it took me a few reading to figure out what this was about. Sometimes words can have more than one meaning. Little did I suspect this work of art was to be read at face value.
Been recalling childhood recently?
Great job.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Nice picture. Actually it took me a few reading to figure out what this was about. Sometimes words can have more than one meaning. Little did I suspect this work of art was to be read at face value.
Been recalling childhood recently?
Great job.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
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LOL guess yer still a kid, eh? Was actually recalling recent events. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from whitteron
I couldn't for the life of me figure out where you were
taking this without being gross. Since you write mostly romantic pieces, you had me double-stumped. I loved the ending, very clever, and brough to mind the pranks of childhood. Nice piece.
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I couldn't for the life of me figure out where you were
taking this without being gross. Since you write mostly romantic pieces, you had me double-stumped. I loved the ending, very clever, and brough to mind the pranks of childhood. Nice piece.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
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Thanks you. So much fun so simply done. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from Summer J Breeze
On bubbles yes, but not spit! Euw! Hahaha. OK, great presentation-I love the bubble- and his anticipation just leaps off the page. A fun write, for sure. You were playing! :)
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On bubbles yes, but not spit! Euw! Hahaha. OK, great presentation-I love the bubble- and his anticipation just leaps off the page. A fun write, for sure. You were playing! :)
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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I was playing hard too, girl !!! MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHk thanks so much!!!
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Smiling right back atcha, girlie!!!!
Comment from percival86jack
HOLY CRAP!!! What are you trying to do to this old man! Last checkup, everything was good, but this kind of stuff can be very dangerous! But don't stop! LOL Loads of love, Jackles xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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HOLY CRAP!!! What are you trying to do to this old man! Last checkup, everything was good, but this kind of stuff can be very dangerous! But don't stop! LOL Loads of love, Jackles xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Suggestion: blow smaller bubbles you. Hehehe. Such fun it is to actually get inside one. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
