Life
How I feel12 total reviews
Comment from quashdog
Yep, life can be exasperating but we'll always struggle to see one more day. As hard as life may get, this is the only one we've got wo we make the most of it. Good short poem.
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Yep, life can be exasperating but we'll always struggle to see one more day. As hard as life may get, this is the only one we've got wo we make the most of it. Good short poem.
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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You just made my day. Can't thank you enough for the comment.
Comment from Chris Tee
This poem needs a lot of work and might not be considered as a valid entry.
Let me show you what it should look like
Example:
I love you so much = 5 syllables
My love for you is extreme = 7 syllables
Much is love for you = 5 syllables
Every = 2 syllables eve=1 ry=1 total = 2
If you edit and fix your syllables I shall gladly give you a re-review
Keep trying ok.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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This poem needs a lot of work and might not be considered as a valid entry.
Let me show you what it should look like
Example:
I love you so much = 5 syllables
My love for you is extreme = 7 syllables
Much is love for you = 5 syllables
Every = 2 syllables eve=1 ry=1 total = 2
If you edit and fix your syllables I shall gladly give you a re-review
Keep trying ok.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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I will try to improve it. Thank you kindly for the heads up.