5:7:5 Positive thinking rewards
Beginning and the End18 total reviews
Comment from Espresso momma
If you see the picture, that will be worth it all won't it? Nice 5-7-5 friend. Your talents are amazing. Thanks for sharing them with us.
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If you see the picture, that will be worth it all won't it? Nice 5-7-5 friend. Your talents are amazing. Thanks for sharing them with us.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
Comment from purrfect tale
I've spent the day working on the start of my novel for NaNoWriMo (a contest for lunatics who think they can write a novel in 30 days, yeap that's me). My imagination needed a break so I come here and the first thing I read it this Haiku. What a perfect fit for me and a gentle reminder of my goals in this contest. If I keep positive thoughts and let my imagination run free, my lovely pursed goals of a completed novel will be achieved. Thanks for the pep talk. As far as I'm concerned you wrote this just for me.
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I've spent the day working on the start of my novel for NaNoWriMo (a contest for lunatics who think they can write a novel in 30 days, yeap that's me). My imagination needed a break so I come here and the first thing I read it this Haiku. What a perfect fit for me and a gentle reminder of my goals in this contest. If I keep positive thoughts and let my imagination run free, my lovely pursed goals of a completed novel will be achieved. Thanks for the pep talk. As far as I'm concerned you wrote this just for me.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
Comment from The Stranger
short, well versed, inkeeping with the syllable count required and to top it all, it has my favourite of all animmals, the squirrel. What could be better?
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short, well versed, inkeeping with the syllable count required and to top it all, it has my favourite of all animmals, the squirrel. What could be better?
Comment Written 01-Nov-2011
Comment from amarherig14
Positive thoughts can bring what we think of, the same goes for negative ones. Stay on the positive side. Well written and has a good message in it. Good luck.
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Positive thoughts can bring what we think of, the same goes for negative ones. Stay on the positive side. Well written and has a good message in it. Good luck.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2011
Comment from robyn corum
I love the idea that you took half a vision and turned it into some real and tangible. And then allowed us to peek in on the process. And THEN created another piece of art alongside the first! What a talented fellow you are!
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I love the idea that you took half a vision and turned it into some real and tangible. And then allowed us to peek in on the process. And THEN created another piece of art alongside the first! What a talented fellow you are!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2011
Comment from bellemarie
Short and sweet. Sounds to me like you are a very talented and accomplished member of FanStory. Like your squirrel. Well done.
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Short and sweet. Sounds to me like you are a very talented and accomplished member of FanStory. Like your squirrel. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2011
Comment from allborn66
This is an awesome poem. It communicates its message well. I love the word choice. It has a terrific flow. The picture is great.
Barbara
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This is an awesome poem. It communicates its message well. I love the word choice. It has a terrific flow. The picture is great.
Barbara
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2011
Comment from rchitwood
Very good poem and I enjoyed reading it very good description and smooth flow in just a few lines.Your photo is very good and compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
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Very good poem and I enjoyed reading it very good description and smooth flow in just a few lines.Your photo is very good and compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2011
