Our marriage
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Our wedding"Short book about how our marriage started.
16 total reviews
Comment from TammyGail
I enjoyed this read much
Your imagery was lovely
It was well written
Your ending was perfect
For grabbing your reader to the next
Great work it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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I enjoyed this read much
Your imagery was lovely
It was well written
Your ending was perfect
For grabbing your reader to the next
Great work it was a pleasure
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine
Comment from Jean Lutz
Seems like there is always some hitch before or during weddings. For you it was the ring. No matter -- your marriage has been blessed. That is really what counts.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Seems like there is always some hitch before or during weddings. For you it was the ring. No matter -- your marriage has been blessed. That is really what counts.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine
Comment from oozer
Very pleasant to read. Simply told without any trace of trying to impress. That is most welcome. Some bits caused me to smile Like where you said 'We came out for better And for worse' That also made me jump a bit but i was immediately calmed with information that all went more or less plain sailing. Well, the marriage DID hold.
Pleasantly, kind of unusual.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Very pleasant to read. Simply told without any trace of trying to impress. That is most welcome. Some bits caused me to smile Like where you said 'We came out for better And for worse' That also made me jump a bit but i was immediately calmed with information that all went more or less plain sailing. Well, the marriage DID hold.
Pleasantly, kind of unusual.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine
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AND the same to you, Robina. Are you by any chance the lady who asked me over?????
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For Christmas you mean=
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Are you Robo as well?
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No, sorry, I am not-LOL.
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But you ARE the lady who asked me over???
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No, don't think so.
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Oh, so sorry so!
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no problem-LOL-can happen.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, robina, a great job writing this chapter about the events leading up to the wedding and the wedding day, i enjoyed reading it. i went back and read the three chapters i missed before i read this one.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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this is very well written, robina, a great job writing this chapter about the events leading up to the wedding and the wedding day, i enjoyed reading it. i went back and read the three chapters i missed before i read this one.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine. Thanks for all the effort you took.
Comment from misscookie
I am enjoying your story very much and each time i read it I smile. anf learn how things are so much the same yet mean different thing in other parts of the world.
Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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I am enjoying your story very much and each time i read it I smile. anf learn how things are so much the same yet mean different thing in other parts of the world.
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine
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your welcome. You have nice Sunday to.
Comment from peggles
You certainly had a day to remember
This is a nice story with a smooth flow It managed to interest me in the beginning and held my attention till the end
There are well defined character's and the dialogue flows well
This is very well written with good solid reaistic dialogue It has a natural flow of words, making for an easy read
well done
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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You certainly had a day to remember
This is a nice story with a smooth flow It managed to interest me in the beginning and held my attention till the end
There are well defined character's and the dialogue flows well
This is very well written with good solid reaistic dialogue It has a natural flow of words, making for an easy read
well done
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine
