Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Oh crap, and he's been drinking....
That ain't a good sign.
Great work my friend....delivery is spot on as usual.

This was an unexpected twist, and totally freaked me out.
Well...now what???

Get the next chapter posted you have me hanging again..I hate that!

Thanks for sharing.:) All looked good...didn't catch anything off.
Maureen

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012

I'm knackered! Actually I love this part of the book because so many different facets start emerging. It's nice to get out of the bedroom for a little while.... Thank you my friend, Your review means a lot to me. Alexis x

reply by Maureen's Pen on 31-Jan-2012

Knackered or not keep writing, I'm hanging upside down in a tree waiting on the next chapter....:)
wc

Comment from dhee khaye

Excellent

Glad to follow the next chapter of your story, "Red Dress" by just reviewing in this bonus review, As I mentioned before your story is enjoyable to read. The characters plays smoothly in my mind. You narrate this chapter well as you have done in your other work. good job here. Thumbs up!

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012

Thank you so much for your review, and thumbsup. It's reviews like this that keep me writing! Alexis x