The Red Dress
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Comment from AlexAX
You always write so the reader is coming back for more, sometimes BEGGING for more lol Another great chapter! I don't know what those girl's are doing though, but I guess they think they are helping. Lisa is going to be so damn mad. Alex :)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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You always write so the reader is coming back for more, sometimes BEGGING for more lol Another great chapter! I don't know what those girl's are doing though, but I guess they think they are helping. Lisa is going to be so damn mad. Alex :)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Maybe, maybe not. Lots going on in the next few chapters that will shape Lisa's destiny! Huge thanks for this and your other reviews. Alexis x
Comment from kenzi'spoems
i haven't had a chance to read all of your chapters, but i have read a few and i am in LOVE with Lisa! she is such an amazing, good, strong character and i wish i could be a good a writer as you and create a character like her!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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i haven't had a chance to read all of your chapters, but i have read a few and i am in LOVE with Lisa! she is such an amazing, good, strong character and i wish i could be a good a writer as you and create a character like her!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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What a lovely thing to say! Thank you so much. Alexis x
Comment from rwilliam
Oh bother! These girls are making a mess of things!!! Goodness, I hope Lisa can stand up to him and put him off!
Another wonderful chapter. I didn't see anything to 'fix':-).
Keep 'em coming girl. I'm soo enjoying this book!!
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Oh bother! These girls are making a mess of things!!! Goodness, I hope Lisa can stand up to him and put him off!
Another wonderful chapter. I didn't see anything to 'fix':-).
Keep 'em coming girl. I'm soo enjoying this book!!
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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And I am so enjoying your wonderfully encouraging reviews. Thank you so much! Alexis x
Comment from MumEsGirl
There is one thing I have learned from you my friend and that is how to leave the reader hanging on a finger nail.
Brilliant work, you did say that the letter would cause trouble but I had momentarily forgottten.
I can just imagine them tryng to paste the bits together
looking forward to more
kate
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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There is one thing I have learned from you my friend and that is how to leave the reader hanging on a finger nail.
Brilliant work, you did say that the letter would cause trouble but I had momentarily forgottten.
I can just imagine them tryng to paste the bits together
looking forward to more
kate
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much, Kate. Your encouragement is really inspiring, and makes me want to write more, and more. Alexis x