Candles and Dragons
fantasy by candlelight17 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
I like the image of the dragon growing out of the candle flames
excellent descriptive detail of these protective dragons - a wonderfully imaginative and evocative free verse :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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I like the image of the dragon growing out of the candle flames
excellent descriptive detail of these protective dragons - a wonderfully imaginative and evocative free verse :-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thanks,Brooke. Elaine
Comment from Peter@Poole
This sure is a fantasy, but your images are clear, Elaine. 'Appear' and 'calendar' might be getting close to rhyme. Apart from that, I can't really comment on what you imagine, and I see it's not meant for a contest. Sorry to disappoint. Peter
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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This sure is a fantasy, but your images are clear, Elaine. 'Appear' and 'calendar' might be getting close to rhyme. Apart from that, I can't really comment on what you imagine, and I see it's not meant for a contest. Sorry to disappoint. Peter
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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No disappointment here. This poem just came out of me and is a different theme for me. Thanks for taking time to read and review. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
Much beauty in this, mermaids. The way you use dragons is fascinating, as you make them out to be protective creatures with toothy smiles. It's interesting what you can imagine in something like candlelight. You have the red, blue and lavender colors that stand out for you. The phrase "candles of life" is excellent. Very imaginative. judi
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Much beauty in this, mermaids. The way you use dragons is fascinating, as you make them out to be protective creatures with toothy smiles. It's interesting what you can imagine in something like candlelight. You have the red, blue and lavender colors that stand out for you. The phrase "candles of life" is excellent. Very imaginative. judi
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from poetstar
Greeting me with toothy smile, is a favored line, but I love them all. This reminds me of a dragon lamp we used to have on top of our TV. My dad got it over seas when he fought in the Korean War. He had a toothy little smile too. I wonder where the lamp is now. I love dragons, candles, and wall shadows. I enjoyed the way you mentioned the dragon shadows protected you from fear. I also like entities of strength. This is such a super great poem. I like the color too. It is so candle like. Love Vonnie
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Greeting me with toothy smile, is a favored line, but I love them all. This reminds me of a dragon lamp we used to have on top of our TV. My dad got it over seas when he fought in the Korean War. He had a toothy little smile too. I wonder where the lamp is now. I love dragons, candles, and wall shadows. I enjoyed the way you mentioned the dragon shadows protected you from fear. I also like entities of strength. This is such a super great poem. I like the color too. It is so candle like. Love Vonnie
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thanks for a great review and the generous amount of stars. You made my day. Elaine
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Whenever your name comes up, I rush to open it up before the others, because I know I will like what I see. Thanks for always sharing something great. Vonnie
Comment from Gungalo
Oh beware the candle of life and the dragons be gone. What a wonderful fantasy piece this is Mermaids. I loved it and the way you presented it.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Oh beware the candle of life and the dragons be gone. What a wonderful fantasy piece this is Mermaids. I loved it and the way you presented it.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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I appreciate your positive comments and thanks for enjoying this unique poem. Elaine
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I loved it!!
Comment from Anisa-
I love fantasy ... Lol. I thought this was a good poem about dragons. It was a little basic for me, but still good. You painted a magical picture. I have a feeling this was about more than just the actual dragon as well.
Good job. Fun read.
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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I love fantasy ... Lol. I thought this was a good poem about dragons. It was a little basic for me, but still good. You painted a magical picture. I have a feeling this was about more than just the actual dragon as well.
Good job. Fun read.
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. Elaine
Comment from Adri7enne
Sort of comforting. I guess we look to our surroundings to offer comfort in times of fear and pain. Good use of imagination.
I like the simple presentation. Well done.
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Sort of comforting. I guess we look to our surroundings to offer comfort in times of fear and pain. Good use of imagination.
I like the simple presentation. Well done.
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
