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Decent fighting

A Septolet (short)

26 total reviews 
Comment from Espresso momma
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I hadn't heard it called 'decent' guess that is as good as anything. A fight is a fight huh, so let them go at it all fours. Thanks for the reading.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
    Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine.
Comment from Melspoems
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Nice Septolet about not fighting physically but instead expressing your opinion with words. I like the use of the word "decently"...to make it clear you should not be mean when you fight with words.
Nice alliteration of w words in this Septolet too.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
    Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from rchitwood
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Very true we always had to settle a fight and then shake hands when we finished talking. Your poem has good description and smooth flow. Your photo compliments your poem well. Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
    Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Janie King
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Well, this is a nicely written poem and rad smoothly..fighting with words in some ways in more hurtful than just puching someone...hurtful words often leave deep wounds...but I see what you're saying for the style of the poem. God bless.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
    Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Yes that can be true.
Comment from judiverse
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Love the artwork here. You make a good point that words are the most effective weapon. You have to be able to use your brain for that, however. You get in your 14 words. In first stanza, one wonders when who was young? Last stanza makes your point very well. You have your contrast with what was not allowed and what was the appropriate response instead of fighting. judi

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
    Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Glad you liked it this much Judi and thanks for the gorgeous six.
Comment from c_lucas
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Negative reactions never earns what we desire. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
    Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
reply by c_lucas on 22-Feb-2012
    You're welcome, Ine. Charlie
Comment from Linda England Bonam
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This was cute, Robina! I enjoyed this one. I have never written one of these septolets before, but it looks kind of hard. I will have to try it one day and see if I can do it.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
    Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. It is not that hard Linda.
Comment from percival86jack
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I know this image is very current but it seems I've been left behind somewhere along the way! LOL
"We had to fight decently with words"... the changing times eh! Hugs, Jack xxxxxx


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
    Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Violence does seem to be escalating which is truly a scary issue at the schools.
Well penned and great powerful lines.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
    Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Newsome
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Words can be extremely powerful if used correctly. They can also inflict pain just as if a real weapon was used, perhaps more so! Enjoyed your writing!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
    Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Yes true enough, you are not the first to point that out to me.