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Double-Dip

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Comment from Glasstruth
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LOL. Very sexual, but tastefully done. Love the whole poem, but especially the ending: "then measured her rumpus,
said, 'Blimey, let's try double-dipping!" Great write! Les

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 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 13-May-2012
    Thank you, Glasstruth. I'm glad you enjoyed. X
Comment from c_lucas
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Taking the magic wand in hand is one way to satisfy the beast. Demanding too much of it power will weaken it's magicc. This is very well written.Good luck in your contest.


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 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 13-May-2012
    Thank you, Charlie. I'm glad you enjoyed. X
reply by c_lucas on 13-May-2012
    You're welcome. Charlie