Do you feel me and my love ?
Love comes out into the heart20 total reviews
Comment from Veronica Grace
Although some of the lines threw me off by the wording, I thought your message came through loud and clear. I wish you all the luck in the poetry contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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Although some of the lines threw me off by the wording, I thought your message came through loud and clear. I wish you all the luck in the poetry contest.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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Thanks for grateful review.Dear sir,i want more improve in own writing.Please help me.Good night
Comment from writingdream7
You did a good job with writing your poem. I like the picture you chose to go with it... At the bottom you have "love is love." That is true. :) Great writing.........
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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You did a good job with writing your poem. I like the picture you chose to go with it... At the bottom you have "love is love." That is true. :) Great writing.........
Comment Written 22-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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thank you
Comment from IndianaIrish
You've written an obviously important love poem by you, but why is it entered in the 5-7-5 contest?? Your poem is no where near the requirements for this contest. Please read the directions as I think it's easy to understand, but if you need help, there's lots of people here who can.
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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You've written an obviously important love poem by you, but why is it entered in the 5-7-5 contest?? Your poem is no where near the requirements for this contest. Please read the directions as I think it's easy to understand, but if you need help, there's lots of people here who can.
Indy :>)
Comment Written 21-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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My Dear,
I know 5/7/5 contest is one of poem almost 3lines.
The first line in 5 syllable,second line in 7 syllable and
third line in 5 syllable.But I am no use this system beacouse
the poetry's concept is so different.As a blowing love concept.It is so running.
Thanks.
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My Dear,
I know 5/7/5 contest is one of poem almost 3lines.
The first line in 5 syllable,second line in 7 syllable and
third line in 5 syllable.But I am no use this system beacouse
the poetry's concept is so different.As a blowing love concept.It is so running.
Thanks.
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Dear sir,
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Dear sir, I know how to wrote 5/7/5 contest.But i trying to creat new ideas build up very seccess.Oky thank you.
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thanking you
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thanking you
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thanking you
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Okay. Try to follow the rules when you enter your work in a contest. And I'm a girl ... not a sir :>)
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi ashimpandit, this poem you've penned is not a 5-7-5 poem.
The contest for this 5-7-5 has specific rules for it. If you go back into the contest and read them you may be able to rework this poem so that it conforms to a 5-7-5 poem.
That basically means it must have a syllable count of 5 in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line and 5 syllables in the third line.
Hope this helps you.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Hi ashimpandit, this poem you've penned is not a 5-7-5 poem.
The contest for this 5-7-5 has specific rules for it. If you go back into the contest and read them you may be able to rework this poem so that it conforms to a 5-7-5 poem.
That basically means it must have a syllable count of 5 in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line and 5 syllables in the third line.
Hope this helps you.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 19-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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thank you
Comment from adewpearl
Ashimpandit, you have misunderstood the rules of the 5/7/5 contest.
Your poem should be only 3 lines long.
The first line should have 5 syllables in it.
The second line should consist of 7 syllables. The third line should be 5 syllables long.
This is a nice romantic poem, but it does not meet the requirements of the 5/7/5 form. Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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Ashimpandit, you have misunderstood the rules of the 5/7/5 contest.
Your poem should be only 3 lines long.
The first line should have 5 syllables in it.
The second line should consist of 7 syllables. The third line should be 5 syllables long.
This is a nice romantic poem, but it does not meet the requirements of the 5/7/5 form. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2012
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thank you
Comment from Stalking Wolf
Sounds like the person totally in love with their significant other, only seeing the good, and reveling in each thing this person says and does. There should be more love like this in the world. Good rhyme and flow, enjoyed.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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Sounds like the person totally in love with their significant other, only seeing the good, and reveling in each thing this person says and does. There should be more love like this in the world. Good rhyme and flow, enjoyed.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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Thank You
Comment from Gungalo
Spoken like a truly in love person would say it. I think that it's the kind of thing one would say to a lover. Beautifully done.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Spoken like a truly in love person would say it. I think that it's the kind of thing one would say to a lover. Beautifully done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Thanking you
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My pleasure my dear.
Comment from Wes Guptill
Simple. Honest. Endearing. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece and will recall it, silently, when next I look upon my own love.
Thank you for this.
Peace to you and yours.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Simple. Honest. Endearing. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece and will recall it, silently, when next I look upon my own love.
Thank you for this.
Peace to you and yours.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Thanking you
Comment from LJ-HBIC
Love poems always seem to be the most poetic, and the most deeply felt by the reader. You did a great job feeding that desire we all feel for blessed love - if only. Great job.
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Love poems always seem to be the most poetic, and the most deeply felt by the reader. You did a great job feeding that desire we all feel for blessed love - if only. Great job.
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Thanking you
Comment from Sally Carter
I am puzzled at how many of these 5-7-5 poems I have read this week which do not meet the requirements of the contest - and yours, I am afraid is one.
The contest requires a short, three line poem, in which the first line contains five syllables, the second contains seven, and the third contains five. Although this is charming, it is so far off the 5-7-5 that I'm afraid you need to go back to the drawing board and have a rethink.
Best wishes, and I hope you can come up with something suitable.
Best wishes
Sally
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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I am puzzled at how many of these 5-7-5 poems I have read this week which do not meet the requirements of the contest - and yours, I am afraid is one.
The contest requires a short, three line poem, in which the first line contains five syllables, the second contains seven, and the third contains five. Although this is charming, it is so far off the 5-7-5 that I'm afraid you need to go back to the drawing board and have a rethink.
Best wishes, and I hope you can come up with something suitable.
Best wishes
Sally
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2012
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Thanking you
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My pleasure. You are certainly not alone in the misunderstanding, if that's any consolation. :~)
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thanking you
