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Dodgy Desiderata

A hoodlum's rules for life

72 total reviews 
Comment from Quire's Gal
Exceptional
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What an imagination poet. This is so creative. "just a little sweetener can make a cop go blind" is my favorite!

Flows well, good rhyming couplets, inventive rhymes, (Wesson, lesson) and definitely good advise if one wishes a life of crime. :)

You had me laughing all the time. So glad I hit this on a Sunday when I had my sixes. Good luck in the contest with this zany trip through the alphabet.
Katherine

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
    Katherine, thank you for the lovely review and the six stars. I use my wife as a chuckle-meter for these humorous posts and I got a few good gurgles out of her with this one...
Comment from Cornelius2000
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Short, sweet and CLEAN it is....and clever too. Not only have you come up with all these rules for life, but rhymed them too....and used humor. I especially liked, "Lady Luck's an oxymoron; never trust a dame." Nice job.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
    Thank you!
Comment from ScarletClearwater
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I love these types of poem s and your had humour and rhyme. Great job with this piece. It was a pleasure to read. So much fun. Kudos!

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
    Thank you!
Comment from Janeyjane
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i liked this poem very much the flow and narration have been done very well. I give this a well deserving five stars. Thank you very much for sharing will be looking forward to more of your work.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
    Thank you so much.
Comment from Taffspride
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Extremely well done, and if ever I find myself in a "Dodgy" situation I shall remember these rules.

You have met the rules of the competition, even using X correctly, although Xanax is not in my medicine cabinet. LOL

Ddiolch for sharing.
Taffspride



 Comment Written 09-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
    And ddiolch to you too for taking the time to review.
Comment from poesyapprentice
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Interesting slant to this rules for life contest... some amusing lines, versatility for one...I liked your line about guns not killing but people will, that is so true! You kept to the rules (unless they count those tiny little colorful spots as unclean) and gave it a twist. Nice job!

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
    Thanks for the review worthy apprentice...
reply by poesyapprentice on 10-Sep-2012
    lol and you too!
Comment from Titanx9
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I wish I had another six stars; this one is deserving of ten stars. You not only did an outstanding job with the ABC poem, but you rhymed magnificently. I love this poem. It's a delicious tale that you've managed to keep cogent, even in this format. I will remember to vote. Good luck!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
    Thanks for the enthusiastic review and the virtual six.
Comment from artemis53
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What a hilarious piece. Your theme is highly original and I congratulate you on your imagination. " Muscly men with baseball bats deserve your best respecting.
My most favorite line!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
    Thank you.
    Funny the number of different lines people have chosen as their favourite...
Comment from lewische
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Just lovely! What a great laugh! Some really funny images and the rhyming flowed without any apparent contrivance. I laughed out loud quite a few times - 'Lady Luck's an oxymoron; never trust a dame'. Great writing. Thank you!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
    Thanks for reviewing.
reply by lewische on 10-Sep-2012
    You're very welcome!
Comment from Grace Campbell
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I smiled the whole time I read this. This ryhmed like heaven. It was so funny, and you couldn't have picked a better picture. I don't know which line was my favorite--they're all so good. If someone offered me a thousand dollars to pick my favorite line, I'd be scratching my head for hours.
Good job!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
    Thank you, Grace - nice review