A Wind Chime
A gift In Memory, see author's notes31 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is an exquisite poem. The cadence is perfect, the rhyme wonderful and the message deeply touching.Please accept my condolences for your family's loss.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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This is an exquisite poem. The cadence is perfect, the rhyme wonderful and the message deeply touching.Please accept my condolences for your family's loss.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Ideasaregems-Dawn, now that is a pen name. Thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review my work. Also for your condolences. It is appreciated so very much... jls
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi Jlsavell,
How much I have missed your poetry! Been gone for a while, but I am back. You probably remember me, mtngalofnc. Though the screen name has changed I am still the same (mtnspirit)
Your poem is as beautiful as always and I particularly enjoyed the 3rd. Stanza. Sorry for your sons loss. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Hi Jlsavell,
How much I have missed your poetry! Been gone for a while, but I am back. You probably remember me, mtngalofnc. Though the screen name has changed I am still the same (mtnspirit)
Your poem is as beautiful as always and I particularly enjoyed the 3rd. Stanza. Sorry for your sons loss. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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mtnspirit, where have you been? I have missed you. How is your son? Have you posted znything I have missed. I will have to look, though you are still in my fan list. Thank you so much. It is good to hear from you... jimi
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, jlsavell, you did a great job writing this beautiful quatrain poem about the gift of windchimes to bring a memory to someone. that's beautiful
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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this is very well written, jlsavell, you did a great job writing this beautiful quatrain poem about the gift of windchimes to bring a memory to someone. that's beautiful
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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sweetwoodjax, thank you for stopping by to read and review my work. I am moved.. jls
Comment from Eleanor Buron
The lines are so beautifully written in this poem-tribute in honor of your son's father.
"A beauty that perched its sun on your life's porch" is just one memorable line out of the many. I like the tone, rhythm, rhyme and especially the theme of chimes; the poem rings with love and hope even on this sad occasion.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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The lines are so beautifully written in this poem-tribute in honor of your son's father.
"A beauty that perched its sun on your life's porch" is just one memorable line out of the many. I like the tone, rhythm, rhyme and especially the theme of chimes; the poem rings with love and hope even on this sad occasion.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Eleanor Buron, words can never express my deep appreciation for your continued support of my work. Thank you ever so much for your review and for your condolences. jimi
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Blessings your way!
Comment from fdgsr
Your imagery is fantastic. You touch every sense and every sensation. I almost forgot to check the meter, rhyme and reason. I was carried away by the flow of the theme from beginning to end. I only add, "Within the heart of Truth is the meaning of God to Man."
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Your imagery is fantastic. You touch every sense and every sensation. I almost forgot to check the meter, rhyme and reason. I was carried away by the flow of the theme from beginning to end. I only add, "Within the heart of Truth is the meaning of God to Man."
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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fdgsr, once again a big big thank you. I always love to hear from you and how my work touches you. I also love your insight and comments.. How are you? jimi
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Thanks jimi. Your replies always give me a lift. It is nice to be appreciated.
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you are so sweet. I love our comraderie. As I said before, you are quite interesting. You have a higher level of thinking and I enjoy our talks. I know you have a work, I must get to. It will be sometime this week. I am anxiuos to read it. Hope you are well and doing better since your bout with illness.. your friend.. jimi
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I almost missed it that you had not responded to this review. Thanks for the kind words. I sense that you get my message. Very rewarding to an old geezer. Wish I had a memory that matched my logic and perspective.
Comment from artemis53
Definitely a fitting memory. I have wind chimes even inside of my house to catch the cross ventilation between the rooms. to hear a chime and think of a loved one is exquisite.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Definitely a fitting memory. I have wind chimes even inside of my house to catch the cross ventilation between the rooms. to hear a chime and think of a loved one is exquisite.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Diane, thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review my work. I appreciate you very much.. again thank you... jimi
Comment from marilyo
What a lovely way to remember a loved one who has passed on - a wind chime! Your poem told of the wonderful benefits its sound can bring - happy memories, the sound of his voice, the music of the beautiful place where he is now. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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What a lovely way to remember a loved one who has passed on - a wind chime! Your poem told of the wonderful benefits its sound can bring - happy memories, the sound of his voice, the music of the beautiful place where he is now. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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marilyo, thank you so very much for stopping by to read and review my work. It is so appreciated... jls
Comment from Newsome
So sorry for your loss. This poem is a very beautiful tribute to him. Jimi, this poem will touch many hearts...I know it has touched mine. Also, the wind chime memorial was a very heartfelt way to express a lasting memory to all.
Newsome
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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So sorry for your loss. This poem is a very beautiful tribute to him. Jimi, this poem will touch many hearts...I know it has touched mine. Also, the wind chime memorial was a very heartfelt way to express a lasting memory to all.
Newsome
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Newsome, my wonderful friend, thank you ever so much. I value your opinion and your friendship... jimi
Comment from Poetic Friend
Jimi, this brought me to tears. My condolence on your lost. May your word be comforting to his loved ones. I would definitely be reading this one again and again.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Jimi, this brought me to tears. My condolence on your lost. May your word be comforting to his loved ones. I would definitely be reading this one again and again.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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Poetic Friend, as always I am moved by your reviews of my work. Thank you ever so much for your support of my work and for the heartfelt condolences.. again thank you.. jimi
Comment from visionary1234
What a beautiful, and meaningful, tribute you have written to a fine man. And a special "thank you" for sharing it on this site. Blessings, Sharyn
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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What a beautiful, and meaningful, tribute you have written to a fine man. And a special "thank you" for sharing it on this site. Blessings, Sharyn
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2012
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visionary1234, thank you very much for stopping by to read and review my work. jls
